by xelliebabex
I love Callie!!! :D
I was the first view and first comment ;)
Thanks ellie, sooooooo much appreciate the chapter! Made my day
Charde
I think in time Callie will see that this is a different type of love.
The only thing I don't like is her need to call him by his Christian name, it goes against the daddy baby theme.
Let's see.
Using rape and dominance as a cover for his own inadequacy.
Dominating when enraged and out of control.
Emotional blackmail and abuse.
He's a pig.
Did you read the whole story. There is no rape here. He is the first one not to emotionally use her. She is finally loved and safe. You obviously don't know about this lifestyle and should learn before commenting.
Why was Odin's little girl called Suzi in the first series but now in this one she is called Sarah? I'm confused.
I have down graded this chapter to 4 stars, he shouldn't have been allowed to take Callie into the "playroom" in anger as it then became a torture chamber something that no sane person should have never mind use it and inflict it on the girl he claims to love. Elsewhere in this chapter he use talking to her in a romantic way as if what he is feeling is just that a romantic love. That scene and those words just did not jell.