All Comments on 'Camping Exposure Ch. 11'

This story is one of my current favourites. I'd thought, back around Chapter 6, that it was about to end, but you keep finding new and convincing ways to keep it going. I love it! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

You are one of my favorite authors. However, this "story" has gone on long enough. Wait until you finished then post as novel length. Or, give a synopsis to start, as wasted time going back to figure out who is doing what et al. Yes, once I figure out what is going on, I enjoy the story as I did the previous never ending chapters.

Wow! This got interesting!! I've said a couple of times that Adam and friends needed some concrete shoes and a ride aboard the SS Karma's a Bitch. But, the way in which Adam and company were dispatched was truly something, I'm impressed and a little scared! Curious to see how this plays out.

WOW!!! All of the developments happening on this chapter was incredible. Sue’s revelations, Sylvia’s discovery and Sue’s sudden need to lick cum from a pussy. The mysterious call from Officer Julie then the description of the torture and punishment that Adam and the two others got was true sadistic payback for what they did to various female victims. Then the surprise that Allen was also drugged & programed. The final shock being the seduction of Officer Julia which might not be over. Thank You and you sure have kept this story exciting and interesting.

The ending of Adam is a fitting one, if it's true. There's always the chance that Julia thinks this because of Adam's imprinting. And now he's away and free because he's supposedly dead. I'd want to see the body.

The next surprises could come in the following actions:

1. Adam's mother is going get caught with Adam's list of friends that were always at the house to help him abuse the women and get them programed to love his perversion of them. She is also a client list of frequently called men and women (to include Dr Kim), he sold these women or their videos to. On these lists is red pen marking who has been killed and yellow marks of who is next.

2. Dr Kim is caught instead of June killing as above, to cover his training of Adam, June and friends before they can cut deals to reveal the training films of Dr Kim and his wife training them on the process and the money they can make, as well as what his cut of take is.

I'm loving this series of stories. Very well conceived and executed.

And I can tell that there's still a lot that can be told. Looking forward to many more chapters.

LOTS of surprises in this chapter, it was a good one.

It's getting even more wierd.