All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 05'

by MarleeM

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fairlyfreefairlyfreealmost 11 years ago
So, so hot

Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
so-so

experience has taught that they need to get away from the possibility of father showing his big or little head. Son can hide in mothers closet, or even under the bed after everyone has gone to bed. Chancey, but exciting.

newporter56newporter56almost 11 years ago
Nice

Outstanding story can't wait for the next chapter.

bradrogersbradrogersalmost 11 years ago
very hot!

so hot! waiting with great anticipation...can't wait to find out what happens next! :-)

hosewanker00hosewanker00almost 11 years ago
Mmmmm, Baby

Marlee, we have to wait so long for updates!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
You know

Your teasing us.....come on......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So erotic

I just discovered your stories and they got me off so good. My only complaint is that I wish things happened at a slower pace between mom and Ricky. That he didn't figure out who it was on cam right away.

Thank you for still writing.

j.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
a great story, but come on, get Ricky's big hard cock...

up his mother's cunt, let the boy blow his young balls up the cunt he came out of. He wants it, his mother wants it, and your readers sure as fuck want it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
so very,...

very hot...i'm not getting much work done!

thank you anyway.

nylonpunkienylonpunkieabout 4 years ago
Such a tease

Both you (the writer) and the mother is teasing,

very very horny reading these, xx

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a12 months ago

This is a very good series; however, I would have liked a little more character development. For example, what employment does the father and mother have? Since the marriage appears to be emotionally, romantically and sensually dead, could the mother support Ricky and herself? Unless the son is mentally and psychologically dead, he must realize how much his mother needs him. How much he makes her feel alive. He has recharged her self-image, self-worth, andher femininity.

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