All Comments on 'Caught in the Storm'

She's blond ... she brunette ... she went to see her ex "the other day" ... she left him six months ago. Which is it?

Don't rush to put your story on-line ... read it, correct it, read it again. YOU pick up the errors, not me!

And poorly written, we have the next sammiexxx.

written by a teenager who spends his school days looking out the window wanting to be a rap star instead of learning useful skills like spelling, grammar, composition.