All Comments on 'Centerfold Ch. 03'

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retmstrretmstralmost 9 years ago
****

Strange ending. He evidently doesn't want commitment. Prick! Is there more? Writing was good. Cheers!

bigurnbigurn10 months ago

That took a odd turn at the end. He seems to be a " wham bam, good night Mam " kind of guy now. 3 stars

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