All Comments on 'Centerfold Ch. 04'

by JayLikestoRead

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retmstrretmstralmost 9 years ago
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Waiting for another year to get Cami pregnant may pose birth defect problems at 41. I don't like the way this went/is going. Writing a bit stilted this chapter, but I'm no editor/proofreader. Thanks for the read, JLR. Cheers!

rodryder44rodryder44almost 5 years ago
Centerfold magic

Nice story well written.

linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Great Love Story

Such wonderful story, I'm so glad I read it.

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