All Comments on 'Charity Begins at Home'

by sunburycd

Sort by:
  • 18 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5/5 No1 story writer in Literotica

Your best story is 'Home shopping'. Love all your stories. More stories please, Plz write a 5page mom-son Piss drnkng story. Or an edited version of one of your story as wet version, Thanks

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
great story

5 stars again. I agree - you could always add another chapter to Home Shopping - great one - but then, all your stories are brilliant! BUT PLEASE NO mom-son pissing stories. a quick way to fall off the charts!!!

this was a very clever and sexy story. THANKS!

washdog10washdog10over 5 years ago
Good Story

All of your mom/son stories are good ones and free of gross perversions so please no piss drinking mom/son story. Five stars for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow! Excellent story.

Very erotic, very well written.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

tribelover330tribelover330over 5 years ago
Great read

Very well written. Thanks for posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just couldn't get into it

Not sure what it was about the story but just couldn't get into it. *

69licklover6969licklover69over 5 years ago
loved it

great writing and i got so involved i thought i was running and playing with mom

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it!

It's obvious what they'll be doing as trainer/client, especially when dad's at work! Fantastic à

kmac99kmac99over 5 years ago
Fantastic!

Superlative writing, sir! Very well done. You captured the emotions and the forbidden, the adultery and sneaking around so realistically. Very impressive. Please keep it up. You are an astounding writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent

I really enjoyed this story. Despite the situation honestly being quite unrealistic, it still felt quite natural if that makes sense.

The characters were pretty enjoyable, the banter between the three characters is fun and really gives the story substance, if you are planning to continue this story i hope the Father doesn't just get completely written out or anything lol.

if i had any criticisms is that maybe the sex scenes were too short and the character's appearance weren't described to well. i hope you continue this story with a squeal that ending just blueballed me lmao. Either way excellent story.

arrowglassarrowglassover 5 years ago
Nicely done!!!

Like the way this went together!

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Perfect

You really did a great job on this one, not to much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Love it....

Loved the intimacy between a mother and her son...the son's will being over powered by his awakening for his mother....the unbridled sensual Incestual lust...loved it!

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
I liked it.

The mud run, the wrestling match in the flower bed, all of it. I'd like to see more of mom and her personal trainer.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
OUTSTANDING !!!!!!!!!! ^*!^*!^*!

FOR ONE REASON OR ANOTHER,

YOUR STORIES ARE GETTING

BETTER AND BETTER ,EACH ONE

I READ. PLEASE KEEP UP THE QUALITY.

VERY WELL DONE, 5++*******.

...THANK YOU...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another 5 stars. The more I read i get the feeling that these mum son stories are based on personal fantasies or experience. If so then don't stop

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story, very well written and told..........():\

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
usersunburycd@sunburycd
Thank you to all that have followed me for a while now and those new to my kind of storytelling. Although my contributions have lessened, understand I do continue to read all your comments and appreciate the engagement and feedback. Just a quick note to explain myself in res...