All Comments on 'Cheating'

Nice quick tale. I figured it out early but it took nothing away from the story.

It was obvious that the photos were going to be fakes, but that was okay. The interesting part of the story would have been the confrontation, angst, and dialog after the husband found out what happened.

She's in a lot of trouble, marriage salvageable. He's dead to me, after I make his life hell.

dear ole trevor will definitely hear about this as will his wife..and as far as trevor goes his face better never darken my doorstep again other wise he will flat fucking die. may yet ..as for wife well she better find me a lady friend to fuck also..she is the one who fucked trevor because she didn't trust hiubby..so hubby should get that pussy he didn't get for real ..just for what she did..i hope trevors wife divorces him also..would be nice if trevors wife fucked him but make it a real fuck

be that dumb i don't think, i would say this story belongs in humor would love to see a follow up where the husband finds out and kicks the piece of garbage to the curb, but i read some of your other stories and that wouldn't happen.

Crime without punishment lowered your score.

yawn...

What Next....no tension here, but you could develop some depending on what happens next...does she tell, does Trevor blackmail her, or does she want a re-match? Kind of boring up to here, but potential is there...

I do like short stories like this. Not really a new idea, but still a twist ending is fun.

For the commentors who think there will be some punishment from Mike towards Trevor I hate to rain on your parade but I doubt she will tell him that she fell for the trick. But mabye she can get him back in a sequel --that could be interesting.

You forgot two things: 1) You should have labeled this as Chapter 1, or the like. 2) Give us a clue as to Wifey's anger and plans. Please finish this story.

why even waste your time writing this. You have maybe half a story here. If it is just a first chapter you should indicate that. As it is this kind of story sucks and can't figure out why you would publish it this way!?!?

Good to see PhotoShop has finally arrived at LW. Agree this is just a part of a story! Sweetie has an interesting puzzle ahead. Also agree that Ch1 needs to be on first posting of a sequel.

We have a story with very little effort put into it. First; it is a much overused plot. If you're going to re-hash a story that's already been re-hashed multiple times, at least use some creativity in doing it; make it your own. Unfortunately that was not done here.

This has been done much better.

I saw it comming photoshop is to easy nowadays but she still has to deal with the problem that it has created now. someone said sequel yea but for a down and dirty quick story it was a good one.

Cute tale as it is, but chapter two should not be written.

Another stupid bitch that will believe any thing bad someone tellsthem about thierhusbands

Takes this guys word without checking with her husband. Time for a divorce .dumb writers story.

ooops!!!

but still a good story

dumber and dumber.

fell for it. I love Photoshop. Trevor

For the read.

simple, no real plot, story not developed...not worth reading

So.....who cuts off Trevor's equipment and sends it through grinder? How does Mike respond to his wife's lack of communication?

Needs more development. Good start and premise, just needs to be fleshed out and completed.

It is not a big loss; she got an education. And, certainly she will not tell her husband since her indiscretion is best left unsaid and forgotten.

someone will talk, they always do and then it happens there will be blood, lots of red fresh runny blood.

What happened? Rated it a #1 for unfinished story.

The point of a "short story" is that it doesn't get over-developed. the rest is up to the reader to consider. I thought it delivered its point well.

... When he finds out (they always find out), he should beat the crap out of him and divorce her (stupid bitch).

Panther Fan.

Clever, old chap, really quite clever. Good job, well done.

Well written - great humor.

wife lead down the road ... awesome

To short , no conclusion!

This is pretty good but you NEED to do something to finish this. Why not write another chapter you know like " Cheating chapter 2 ". You know let the readers know what happened because Trevor actually raped her for one thing. and since he came in her did she or did she not get knocked up ? things like that and what did her husband do about her giving her pussy up to him without even talking to her husband. Come on guy FINISH THE DAMN STORY.

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There is no way that she would cheat and not require him to use a condom. She knows that Trevor cheats on his wife. So why would she want an STD?

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This needs revenge and a solution to this scumbags sexual tactics and lies. She has to come clean now

That male Trevor is a low life sick punk to hurt someone with that stupid photoshop trick of his and for Karen to not believe completely in her husband is a sad comment.

You made Karen into a dumb slut and MIKE a into a stupid ass by two people. Karen that should have been in his corner for the long run but, Trevor was just a dick!

So what’s left for Mike once he found out his faith was misplaced. Too hell with Trevor and Karen for a long time if ever. He may not have much left of his self respect for this betrayal by his wife. Standing rule and his wife should have known it.

(DON’T ALLOW ANY MALE FRIENDS TO YOUR HOUSE WHEN YOU ARE NOT THERE.) You don’t know which one thinks only with his little brain but? He knew Trevor was a dick to even work on anything like a picture of him and why his wife had something like that in the Their bedroom?

Three days later Trevor's body was found on the floor of his kitchen with a boning knife plunged into his back. The police have no suspects.

Excellent twist

Another story by this author with no ending. I’m sure he would say that he was leaving the ending up to his readers. OK

Obvious what was going to happen from paragraph one. Tedious.

Reckon mama has got herself a problem .......