by Ahabscribe
An interesting take on the subject. Well written and very well thought out. I admire your imagination.
This story is a lot better than Star trek. Great imagination and forethought has gone into this story. Very erotric, makes one want to go out into space.
A truly original and fantastic yarn with a great twist.
Thank you Ahabscribe.
Very imaginative and skillfully written, with a sci-fi theme, but still very erotic.
Just a very good interesting story.
Thanks for the good story
Very imaginative and erotic story, especially the climax (page 4) Good stuff.
Classic. Love your stories, and this is an example of why.
Hey, very hott-sexy.....& I'm an ardent fan of all things sci-fi so you just made my day.
but....why for crissakes did you make it a threesome? I hate 3somes!!!
Didn't like the character Angel either.
A 3star story that shoulda been a 5.
I liked mom getting pregnant and should have maybe ended after that, but oh well... IT IS YOUR STORY!
I found it in my Mothers arms and in my Daughters pussy it should have read right at the ending. Lovely story, very well done.
The sexy parts were very much sexy. The story parts were very interesting. The problem is that both were good. So when the sexy section was over, I couldnt stop reading the storyline... And by the end if it, I was just kinda aroused, not turned on.
That being said, I'm still give you 5 stars, because I loved the story. There was really no other way to write it, you did just fine. It just wasn't what I was looking for. But I enjoyed it.
Great sci-fi story, very well written! Full of love and sex and forbidden love and...can't say enough! I give it a perfect 10.
Just awesome!
Gorgeous incestous story, combined with scifi. Full of forbidden love, feelings and tender emotions for eachother ... can't say enough! I give it a perfect 10 too... :-))) GO ON LIKE THAT ... PLEASE
Deliciously creative. I loved the intertwined mother-son, father/brother-daughter relationships. What a twist if there'd also been a grandson offspring with Mom! Wouldn't that be fun!
A very original incestuous erotic story. I liked the approach, and this sci-fi story was very well written too. It reminded me of thos old movies, plus I loved the mom/son side of the story a lot too. I think some scenes could have been explored better, considering the set up was superb. All in all, another great story, Ahabscribe. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.
This is a bit different and quite nicely written but I think you had over-used the word 'incestuous' It appears in almost every second paragraph. It would be great if the number of times that it's used is reduced. Regardless it is still a well-written story and I feel the daughther's involvment seems to have slightly cheapens it.
A very good read. Really liked the fact that you did not go the cuckold the father route. Even though he lost out, it worked very well. This was an excellent combination of sex and story. The daughter's part was integral to the story, contrary to other opinions. I will read more of your submissions. Thanks and keep writing!
I have read a few of your other stories and enjoyed them as well but this is a truly new and fun take on the taboo/kink. I love the sci-fi aspect and it is very well handled; notes of "Stranger In A Strange Land" in some ways but with a wholly new direction.
Great read and it has really helped make you one of my favorite Lit authors.
it can take a long time, and more than a little luck to stumble upon such brilliant and arousing story telling on this site
we won't all have the same tastes, but for me this one certainly sets the bar pretty high
well done
but then it went over the top - a bit like Close Encounters of a Third Kind....if only we could meet aliens and solve problems that mankind has created...we abuse this planet as if we have somewhere to escape to......but in the end vice is nice but incest is best especially when he got mother pregnant and then daughter......
No words man. No words explain the awesomeness. No used to sci-fi-ish stuff that was one of the best incest stories I ever read. You are magnificent!!!!
This is the best piece of writing I have seen on this site. Congratulations. Don.
This is the best story I've ever read, and I've read many. Not only was it sexual but very romantic.
I enjoyed the mixing of genre. Romance, Group, Sci-fi, Incest, and Mature.
...give it a 5 star rating, but I'd much rather give it a 10!!! Loved it!
But I didn't this time. I HATE D/d!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 star
That is what this ethereally sanguine story is -- you can't write an eloquent passage describing it's beauty, you just feel it...
Weird...weird...weird...JUST THE WAY I LIKE A STORY TO BE!! This challenges us readers to be open-minded in our reading, following the story-line closely, connecting with the author and what he/she has given us.
Yes, this is "wishful thinking" for the human race...evenin this mad, mad "Covid-19" world, the "God-Virus" DOES EXIST...IT IS WITHIN OUR HEARGS, WITHIM OUR SOULS, THAT GOD DOES LOVE US, HE WISHES US TO BE HIS, FOREVER!!
Take heart, humanity, and look to Jesus Christ for the love we each week...He will open our hearts to each other, making us complete.
And, do not judge my comments here...I am not judging anyone for their beliefs...how could I, being a reader of Literotica stories myself...I love my Brothers and Sisters in this world, and pray that "right choices" are made for Eternity!!
Wonderful story, the love was so erotic but somehow believable. Very well written and told..............():\
Most beautiful. tender mutually consunsual incestuous love story I have read in a while. I do not have the words to express my feelings about this story. This is one time that I wish real life reflected fiction.