All Comments on 'College Boy Meets MILF Neighbor'

Betty needs s baby bump for children

But it seemed disjointed in places. For example, where did the walnuts come from?? The story went from Brian working his way up her body for a second round during their first encounter, to handing her walnuts. Likewise, on page 2, in the shower, she says she never had anything up her ass before, but there was nothing leading up to that. You may want to read your stories a couple of times before you submit. Proofreading is important.

Looking forward to the Christmas story.

Boiler plate story, not very original. *2

Very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.

Could have been great but... You need to get an editor & proofread, proofread, proofread.

Yeah, could use a lot of polish and grammar work!

Enjoyed this

Good.......story....add more chapter for me to read...ty

Wonder if Brian did came home for Xmas college vacation.. right now June 2nd chapter 2 has not been written... or make up 2020 summer fuck a lot and earn over $5,000?..

Good story despite the grammatical errors...keep up the good work

That has always been a fantasy of mine, being with an older, sexy woman...5 stars!!

Your writing is so awkward that I don't know where to begin.

Um, I think you lost a chunk of your story. Where TF did this transition come from?

I started to fuck Betty as hard and fast as I could in a matter of 30 seconds she let out a loud "Fuuuuuuck!"

I turned and handed her the walnuts. "Hope you enjoy your meal."

I couldn't finish Page 1 due to all the mistakes in spelling, names, punctuation... I couldn't keep track of it all!

Terribly written, two stars very generously.

Wish I could have watched my wife do this with 2 cadets and years prior with two brothers.!. All long before we met. Want to watch, So Bad.!.