by rest1979
Writing good but this would not help a marriage and she will do it again. He won't be able to get it out of his mind or trust her. No one could.
But sorry if my wife did this to me she wouldn't be my wife any longer. But nice try
well written. However, I'm afraid she may not be able to refrain from repeat performances. She laid it out already, she wouldn't do it again, unless he agreed ... Assuming the drinks and pot lowered their inhibitions so much, she seemed to sober up soon enough to realize the full extent of what she had done. G.Belgium.
All wimp stories fall into just a few variations. This "story" is in the "my buddy dropped by the house and fucked my wife" category. While the "writer" thinks he's conceived a cute, imaginative little bit of prose, it's actually dull, boring, and so very, very familiar. I'm convinced all these wimp writers share the same brain because they all use the same imagery, the same action sequences, and even the same dialogue. The only thing that changes within each category is the names of the characters—and sometimes even that doesn’t change. How sad is that?
Read a number of the stories in the category to which you refer, and am not seeing the similarities in content or vocabulary. Always find it funny when comments like that come in from the Anonymous crowd. Where are your brilliant tales, buddy? I personally think that some of the 'straying wife' tales on this site are among the best. Slickman comes to mind.
I would suggest to the "writer" to change his hobby to something else,away from writing.
Something like macrame or quilting ! 1 !!!
Your story was excellent and the best on Literotica. I doubt you will ever see this as it has been four years since you have written. You are the best.