by LstDghter1
I could actually see something like this happen; well, the first few paragraphs at any rate. I'm guessing Fionas strength is as a point/scout, you didn't mention what Claires was. I look forward to the next installment.
A great first chapter,,, well set-up for an interesting series,, hope to read chapter 2 soon
I'm also looking forward to the next chapters. Easy to read.
More please! I like the direction this is going, and it's cool to have all the little sci-fi traps and such.
There are a couple of nit picky things I could name but overall this is an amazingly inventive world you've crafted which naturally lends itself to all sorts of erotic story telling opportunity. I want a novel set in this world. The plot is well written and moves at a good pace. I want more. The only question I do have is why did she sign up for the arena knowing that her back, front, and any other door would most likely be well used by season's end?
That was a great read. You must have a female vs male game before the series is over.
For the love!!!! Its been a year please continue this story!!!!! I love it
I would love another one, please write more! The premise is great and I would love a series.
Its the first good and original idea ive seen im a long time and a series that i would read so please keep it going