All Comments on 'Combat Arena'

by LstDghter1

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RpierzRpierzabout 11 years ago
So far so good

I could actually see something like this happen; well, the first few paragraphs at any rate. I'm guessing Fionas strength is as a point/scout, you didn't mention what Claires was. I look forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sequels?

Gave it 5 stars. Would like to see sequels.

MasterEarlMasterEarlabout 11 years ago
A GREAT START

A great first chapter,,, well set-up for an interesting series,, hope to read chapter 2 soon

sabadongelovsabadongelovabout 11 years ago
Great story...

...would love to see a continuation! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

Please write more!!!

seattlejackseattlejackabout 11 years ago
I liked your story!

I'm also looking forward to the next chapters. Easy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

More please! I like the direction this is going, and it's cool to have all the little sci-fi traps and such.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
MORE PLEASE.

There are a couple of nit picky things I could name but overall this is an amazingly inventive world you've crafted which naturally lends itself to all sorts of erotic story telling opportunity. I want a novel set in this world. The plot is well written and moves at a good pace. I want more. The only question I do have is why did she sign up for the arena knowing that her back, front, and any other door would most likely be well used by season's end?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

That was a great read. You must have a female vs male game before the series is over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
please!!!!!!!!!!write more

For the love!!!! Its been a year please continue this story!!!!! I love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Would love to see more! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wow...

I would love another one, please write more! The premise is great and I would love a series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Continue the series

Its the first good and original idea ive seen im a long time and a series that i would read so please keep it going

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