All Comments on 'Cum Addict Pt. 01 Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This got me wet

AngryALAngryALalmost 6 years ago
Great Story!

I read your two chapter in reverse order, but it really didn't matter.....I got a sense of what happened in this chapter while reading Chapter 2 first. That's a sign of a well-written story, that the reader can make logical assumptions about previous action based upon the information provided in following chapter. Keep up the good work! You have talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too long

way too long, too much detail

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Work has been crazy busy and I have had some family issues that are taking up a lot of time. I am still writing and have active drafts for all 3 of my series in motion. I appreciate your patience.

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