All Comments on 'Daisy's Undoing'

Hopefully, another chapter will follow. You certainly have my attention!!!!

This was an amazingly fun and complex story. I loved the role of the numbers and creative twist on all of the games. You're writing style etched out each moment and give the story life. Well done! I hope to see more soon.

Unbelievable tripe. And then the stupid ending. Just plain bad.

Wrong category. Should be in nonconsent.

The story does read as a hallucinogenic fantasy or nightmare, and I won't try to figure out the meaning of the number sequence or any other detail. But I did think it was a great stroke story with some fresh ideas. I will read some of your other work to see what else you have stored in your deviant mind.

It was amazing. Please write more. I wish I was her. I'm very confused about the numbers though.

Bit too extreme for me though, it’s obviously a situation that’s prearranged - because she was prompted to give a safeword - she just wasn’t aware of the exact details of. She wasn’t in a fit state to carry on after sybian scene.

It’s *supposed* to be an erotic mystery for her so rather than use duct tape on her pubic hair they should have just shaved her. Seriously though *duct tape* just using it on skin is painful so using it anywhere with hair a very hard no! It produces the wrong kind of pain. I didn’t see anything sexy about her crawling around on the floor/ air vents either

Overall I did enjoy the story concept I just found it too extreme in places with not enough attention to her health and well-being. Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)