All Comments on 'Dark Descent Ch. 02'

This was really well written

This story is very erotic, I love the way the tension builds!

I'm looking forward to more.

Is this story true I wonder? I hope so!

... you sick and perverted thing. May be he will remove some of your dumbness out of your brain.

Truly extraordinary story - please let this be a true account! I want to hear more, especially Lindsey meeting Marc's two friends!

Looking forward to hearing/seeing more.....

Well written and extremely erotic. I have to say that I loved the description of the wife rimming her black lover. There's something so hot about a white wife willingly using her tongue on a black man's ass.

I can't wait to read more. I only hope that you don't make us wait too long for the next installment.

Because if it is, then I'm seriously worried it's a matter of time before too many black boys read & think this is normal sexual behaviour!!! If you think only over 18s read on this site think again!!! I'm glad I don't have any sons! People who live this lifestyle are demented!!!!!!

Brilliant story, thoroughly enjoyed, can't wait for the next chapter!

The very title of the story indicates that sleeping with black men is a step down.

So hot,i would have been down on that smashed up pussy straight away though cleaning up !

What started off as a great story dwindled into predictable utter trash.

I loved this story

I keep checking but still no chapter 3??? Thank you very much.

I loved the story. I am anxious to see the next chapter. Please let us know when it will be published.

I can see where this is going now she has had her first taste of a big cock the infidelity will continue and the stupid cuck will become surplus to requirement serves him right.

Again one star for content

Five for a good read, well written

Over two years later and we're still waiting. Please, give us the rest of the story. Even if it's a true story, even if the ending is ugly, finish the tale. Surely you can give us an update. If you don't want to give the whole story at least add a comment with a brief synopsis of later events.

I hope the next chapter written soon, great story but it needs finishing. I hope this happens soon. Thank you for the first two chapters....

I sent this story, 1 and 2, to my wife while I was on a business trip. I was very nervous on how she would take it...bottom line is she attacked me like a tigress when I got home and showed me a realistic black dildo she had bought.

Thanks for the effort!

We loved this story. It had a nice slow build up as this “first time” couple sorted through their options and Tracey selected her bull. At first, he was very polite and respectful - as they got to know each other. However, once he got her in the bedroom he completely dominated her which, seemed to be what all of them wanted.

My wife loved the parts where Tracey ended up doing things she had never even dreamed of doing before. It takes a smart, experienced bull to take a wife to that level so quickly. He now has her setup for a mini-gang bang with him and a couple of his black friends. Wow!

In our case, at first, my wife had a few BBC lovers that fucked her hard and she liked that. However, then she met a guy that treated her much like Marc treated Tracey. Somehow, he flipped a switch in her and after that she just had to have black cock. She was morally ruined and would do anything with black men, except expose herself to venereal diseases. She has always been very careful about that.

Our favorite part of the story was, “…his pendulous balls flexing as they were emptying all that they contained deep into my beautiful wife's hot, tight pussy, contraction after contraction, spurt after spurt, coating the inner walls of her pussy with thick seed, her pussy cling to him, milking him, her hips rising up and gyrating with each powerful deep eruption.”

After my wife became a true black cock slut, her hips would just instinctively fuck them back especially when they emptied their seed in her. It is awesome to watch your wife doing this, because it is way beyond just enjoying sex. It is primitive mating; a woman’s hips just take over and seem to have a mind of their own!

So, with your story another faithful, white wife has defiled her marriage vows and will soon be getting multiple black cocks. My wife says, “Good job; that is what all white wives need!”

I loved it and so erotic the way you describe the build up from first meeting to the climax of the experience. Wondering if you’ve done more since then? I’d love to hear about it

Well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

So relieved that hubby was not treated like a wimp as I’m so sick of that theme ... and I’m a black man! Lol

I hope you write more!

This story for me went on a bit long. However what was different for me is that i read it all the way though to the end. Usually i just skip or get bored of reading. Guess that's good testament to the quality of story. I will be reading the other part when Marc brought his friends. Bet Linz looked hot in furs !

The story drug on way too long only to get to a dissapointing and unsatisfying climax.

This was a great series. It's too bad that you didn't write the story with Marc's friends.

The buildup was delightfully consistent with the first story. Again, the grammar could use some work, and I say this not to disrespect you or the story, but with the intent of giving useful feedback. In this way, you'll have a better story and you yourself will feel even more confident as a writer. I'd still give the story a 5, so you don't have to worry about that.

I noticed about half way through the story, the spelling of your own wife (!) changed. It went from Lindsey to Lyndsey. And from that point on, it never changed back. That was very strange, I thought.

Additionally, in the first story, you put X's for the Mediterranean place that you two were going to, but it was so obviously Greece. Later on, you even mentioned Crete, which is part of Greece's territory. I was just curious why you decided to make those decisions.

Well done on the story. I hope to see you writing more about your wife please.

And the divorce was final 14 months later. The end.