All Comments on 'Dave and Alicia Ch. 02'

You write such beautiful brother-sister stories, that I look forward to your updates eagerly. This one didn't disappoint. I like how you expressed Dave's reluctance and realistic concerns. I especially like the loving aspect of it. No degradation, no name calling ("you cum slut!"), just two people working from a basis in love. (I actually think your writing style would translate well into any kind of love story where the two lovers face societal disapproval, such as interracial, older woman/younger man, gay or lesbian, etc. The dynamic is the same - two adults deciding that their love is worth more than society's approval.)

Nicely done. Your character development is wonderful. The reluctance-overcome-by-love feelings are expressed beautifully. There is lots of heat mixed in to keep us involved. Please continue with your efforts.

amazing followup! Nothing but heartfelt emotion and wonderful feeling as I read this. Excellent, and I can't wait until the next chapter!

Finally! I love Dave and Alicia as much as I loved your other stories! I can't wait for the next part!

Excellent job once again!!

Gosh, I was waiting so long for this! I love your writing. Keep up the awesome work!

What a wonderfully written and thought out story. It desn't get any better that this!

It was worth the wait. You have proved that telling the story of two people who truly love and respect each other can be satisfying and entertaining. Nicely done. Wish I had a brother like Dave...or Brett.

and thank you again chargergirl for another great story.

Keep on writing stories like this. With all that is wrong in the world these days, a little love goes a long way.

This is a perfect coming together. I really like the depth you give your characters.

I loved the storie, is alicia going to get pregnant? I think she should

The storm seems to have passed, at least for the moment, even possibily for much longer duration; the clouds are thinning and the sun has directed a stout, direct beam into the hearts and souls of the blossoming, grand love that has so much possibilities!!

Dave's at last realization to himself that he is beginning to believe, understand that he love's his sister Alicia, the only woman to have ever told him she loved him. Is he superficial, does his love grow deep from his vey core for his most cherished friend, confidante, his most beautiful sister Alicia, and the blooming love he has now confessed?

This author has such an ability of imaging the character's actions, their thoughts and dialogue that the reader can see, visualize and emote the presence of each individual as they progress through the story. Alicia's character portrayal is so real, nearly as real as that of her best friend Elizabeth.

Dave has made the leap into the deeper abyss of his sister's heart. Now, how do they deal with their stuffy parents?

I like your writing. Very romantic with lots of emotion. I am so glad I don't have to skip over exaggerated sex scenes. LOL

I seems I found the continuation of your Brett and Lizzy story.

You would probably get more traffic if you made it a series of related stories or something like that. 5 stars for all I have read so far. I will probably stay up until the sun comes up reading your stories.

"Dave And Alicia Ch. 02:" - What can one say about the writing ability and the extremely thoughtful, passionate and elegant charm and style 'chargergirl' uses to develop her love and romance stories of deeply committed siblings of incestual love lifestyles? What can anyone say, that hasn't been said already? She is assuredly dedicated to her craft, because there's not many writers and authors that develop their story with such aplomb and elegance any better than 'chargergirl' does! I could venture to say that I would never tire of reading her incest literary renderings, Her style and near perfection is awe inspiring, extremely easy to read, with nary a worry about any numbers of errors, misspellings, sloppy sentencing structure, etc. I'm sure she's a very diligent and dedicated craftswoman!

Lovely story. Keep up the good work.

Nicely worded. There isn't a place to vote.

I wish there were stars! 5 from me…!!!