All Comments on 'Desert Flower Ch. 02'

There really isn't anything else that can describe this tale for it had everything a pure heart could desire. Even gramps accepted him and now they're off to a bright future together, hopefully we'll be able to follow closely to get every juicy and sweet detail of it. Her popping up at his work might just ensue a riot :)

5*!!!

5* I am dumbfounded and really don't know what else to say. Unbelievable! Hurry chapter 3!!!

I like this story, it seems that this couple has a future, and it is written in a funny way.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Excellent Read, Hope you are working on Ch. 3. Keep it up. Thanks TxRad.

It feels like an introduction to a good love story.

Next?

Awesome, simply awesome, will the adventure continue? It should!

What a beautiful story. Very touching. Thanks!

paint a lovely picture

With my eyes closed and trying to slow down my heart and breathing,I can only dream of the tomorrows I desire!

Ah, for the first time you proved me wrong. There was a second chapter and it was great. First love and experience made this one special. Extraordinary technique gave a vivid picture in my mind of how it all went down. No tears this time, just smiles.