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by billwells1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Sory is not bad, but next time please work on ending. If you end it all like it was just a dream, readers will feel betrayed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hilarious!!

This appears to be a true experience.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Here is a tip

Actually read some litrerature and learn how to write a story. Books are your friend. Maybe one day you will not be garbage and clumsy at trying to make a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a flat and disappointing ending!!

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...