All Comments on 'Early Works - Mind Control Mode'

This is a complex story. The narrative is hard enough to follow without all the separate thought processes with or without emphasis. I was so exhausted in the first half so badly I just jumped to the last page. Your dialogue at the beginning may have been better served explaining the character.

what the fuck man you make him weak the girls being called THAT term which never should have existed!!!!!! THERE IS ONLY MASTER NO SUCH THING AS THE WOMAN BEING DOMINANT YOU FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT I HOPE YOU DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!