All Comments on 'Elizabeth, Happy at Last Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I kind of like this story about Libby and her daddy

I like this story although I kind of wondering about the unborn child in her stomach and what becomes of Libby after she spread her daddy's ashes and afterward her relationship with her son.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Juvenile crap

How old are you? 14? This sorry story certainly reads as if you are.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What the Hell!!

Where's the watersports? Don't use tags that aren't in your fucking story. I read this whole shitty story praying it would get better sadly it didn't

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Quite enjoyable...

though I think it did get a bit repetitive (around father and daughter getting naked and forever having sex). Glad, to be honest, there was no watersports and anal (seemingly very popular with younger guys) hardly a mention. Thanks.

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