All Comments on 'Eva and Daddy Ch. 02'

I rarely comment on an individual chapter, I prefer to see the whole story before commenting. However, this story so far is beginning to look like a good one. I do look forward to seeing how you further develop this, hoping you continue the well written, well developed story!

Excellent description of the bodies and love the tension build. Keep it going!

Only four stars since it's not finished yet. But absolutely loved the build-up and good writing skills. Please don't make me wait too long for the rest of this story!!!

This story line is really well developed. It is one of the hottest tales I have thus far read. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

What the fuck is a cunny. Its called a cunt stupid. Other than that it was great.

The seduction starts in ernest!! Very hot!