All Comments on 'Family Lessons Ch. 6'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Wonderful, Luv

What a great job of telling a story. You sure know a lot about submissiveness

rahulranbirrahulranbirabout 17 years ago
Loving step-mom

Write more such stories/series

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
we need more

he should have made mom do a girl

great story

voyeurism always makes for great stories

Jena121Jena121almost 14 years ago
Family lessons

A great story until the last 5 paragraphs - YUK

DontJudgeMeDontJudgeMeover 12 years ago
Great!

Would really like to see this continued...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The Cop

I thought the cop would get some.

snathsnathalmost 11 years ago
life is good

I don't know if the author will realize that he has to finish this story someday. We waited ten years and what we get?

No offence, but if I happen to live, I will make sure to revisit this f*#$&@^ page for the next ten years!

Thanks

ErotFanErotFanover 8 years ago
Reads like a teenage wet dream

Sigmind Freud and Carl Jung have written treateses on the subject.

Son balls mother with father's premission then supplants father with object of desire. Yum! Great story. Very hot.

Might be improved by an editor with a refresher on the use of the apostrophe with plurals, its vs. it's, and semicolons with joined sentences. Reading through a steamy part, one is interrupted by these seemingly minor glitches.

Stillll... ***** :o)~

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