All Comments on 'Fantasy Date Night Goes Awry'

So bad, that I'm speechless...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

must have used the take a word from column A than B then C method of writing.

Says nothing.

I am always amazed by folks who read a story, whose contents have been clearly outlined, and they then complain about the content. Some people are just stupid -- or just like to bitch and moan.

Good story. Keep writing

"I am always amazed by folks who read a story, whose contents have been clearly outlined..."

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Not really. A very, very, VERY simple fact that idiots like this one can't seem to be able to understand is you have to READ the story before really knowing what's in it.

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Basically, all you argument amounts to "It's advertised as shit, so why care you surprised it's shit." If the the "contents have been clearly outlined" is all I need to know, that means the story is shit and a defense is inane.

That would be a great point!

Err...except for the fact that this story was written by someone named "ImACuck." Shouldn't that have been a clue? If not, what about the tags? "Slut wife", "Bathroom stall", "gangbang." I mean...come on.

top notch genre piece

story plotline and presentation all polished

amazing!

best work here in quite a while

Oh, obviously. Maybe the best story in years. That's why it has the scintillating score and reviews.

In this story, here it is at the top of Page 3: "Fill my married cunt with your sperm!"

What about the rest of her? I'm waiting for a wife in a LW story to make reference to her other married bits. "Let me give you a blowjob with my married mouth." Or "My married hand looks so small holding your big cock." Or "Oh, you sucking on my married boobs feels so good." So many possibilities. So many unexplored married bits.

But somehow it seems that only this one part of the female anatomy gets referred to in LW stories as the married bit.

Weird, what?

Lue

Sorry for the negative comments. I thought it was an entertaining story. The only part where I lost interest was after the initial 3 guys finished. Was this actually a true story?

I too thought it went overboard when the guys left, I was thinking it was going to go into a regular meeting with the first three guys or something.. While I think that would have been better, and lent itself to a series, I still liked the story very much.

Yes I know it is fiction, but for a story to work there has to be something realistic about it, this is gsrbage , pure and simple.

Thanks for sharing. A hot story indeed.

Keep these stories coming, this and your other series need to continue.

Fiction but when we were kids many years ago two sisters would have everyone line up at the park and suck there dicks . They were complete pigs. Another time at the jersey shore there was about 20 staying in the same place hooked up with a girl who fucked them all over the course of two days. Two cousins also fucked eight guys plus any friend that stayed over the course of four weeks in the house . So there are pigs out there sho live to tell these stories. I feel bad for the guy who didn't know them that they married. You just never know

Entertaining and fun to read. Keep writing.

One of the best stories ever. Give us more please. 5*

Then it was a turn off. The train she pulled after just doesn't do it for me.

really good man....

I loved this story! Good job!

Well written, timely topic. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

You son a bitch made me messed on my pant it's way too hard to hide the wet spot at work, for God sake i didn't get caught by anyone. You're damn crazy author if u before me i won't even care to suck your dick. You made this whole day is great

Made me hard

We all know what happens when careless and incompetent people play with fire. This was a good STORY but there are sickos out there that think this kind of thing is OK!

Good writing, good dialog, a bit much after Bryce and his boys left, but what the heck - its fiction. I've had fantasies similar to this one about Jane. Overall the whole "date night" concept in this relationship is really fun. The wife gets 30 minutes before the guy arrives is a great set-up. A gal like this one would only need about 5 minutes, though. And, I gotta say, why do all the guys have HUGE cocks? I mean, that's just too good to be true, right? Anyways - thanks for the great story.

Now theres a wife literally no real self respecting man would touch with a cucks dick. Now a worthless cuck would just love this bot of living vicariously through a woman, since pussy to a cuck is like steak to a vegan.

Wow, that was so over the top, and yet, being in a horny state of mind, I was stroking my cock by the end of your tale. 4 stars from me!

What a Great Story! 5 stars to writer! LOL way over the top. Hubby excited and wants to watch, then just gets in line! Might as well face it, she is going to want this treatment often in the future.

Outstanding story

I wish I could do that!

Good read. But the husband's an asshole.

Cuck shit and the wife is an abusive bitch.