All Comments on 'Fated Ch. 01'

by WFEATHER

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Plainly_JanePlainly_Janealmost 16 years ago
A nice start

If a bit short. I'll have to go back and read the prequel to this story. But I like the start you have here and hope you update soon :)

zfammezfammealmost 16 years ago
short & sweet

i like it. :) it's a nice foundation to the following chapters & "investment" is good too by the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Much...

...TOO SHORT!

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 4 years ago
Yes

This is a nice continuation, keep it up. 5 stars.

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