All Comments on 'Fated Ch. 35'

An erotic story involving two people, one of whom is actually away - unorthodox but refreshing. No explicit sex - beyond that discussed in the letter - but real love. Well done! My only beef with you is that your chapters could be a lot longer - two, three Lit pages long. All yours are just one. This makes your submissions page awfully long, as each series has so many parts.

This is what I look forward to and it has been way to long since the last Chapter of this story and "we" the readers want more from these two kiss/in cousins than a story every six months.! There are so many ways to keep this like an Eveready Battery.! Thanks" WF

Eric is so fucking bloody romantic!!!! I love him. I love them together!

another awesome chapter love it, keep it up.