All Comments on 'Females Rule, Especially Sis!'

fucking my teen sis while sucking a teen cock with dong in my bum.this is my ultimate fantasy. i could go on for days like that!! i would have the girls piss on us in that position and lap it up like a puppy.oh ! i think i just came in my sis's cunt. time to lick it all up !!!!!

I liked the premise. Lots of typos, which for me ruin the flow because my brain goes, 'damn, another typo!' instead of 'wow, that's hot!' I don't think you need to say that every other comment is lewd/in a lewd voice/nasty, etc. It got repetitive and absurd really fast and again, detracts. You're portraying some seriously energetic and exciting sex acts--let those BE exciting instead of the reader getting beaten endlessly over the head with how loud/nasty etc everything is. And really, does anybody use the word Foxy anymore? I thought that one left in the 80's around the time neon clothes and Cyndi Lauper came to prominence.

Amazing work, thank you for your descriptions of hot, lusty, nasty girls and their equally naughty male counterparts <3