All Comments on 'First Mother then Daughter Pt. 01'

Good start! Looking forward to more!

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Great, so far ... looking forward to Part 2

Great story, you have set the character's up well. I'm looking forward to more.

Soooo beautiful ❤️.. thank youuuuuu.. can't wait for part II 😋

Lewis needs to fill Benerly wirh his seed. Then he can fuck the daughter.

Good, but a weird place to stop. You also need to regulate your use of commas. They show up in the strangest places.

A captivating start, a touch tantalising and getting hotter; looking forward to seeing how Beverly seduces him - thank you

Very well written. You have put us on edge and can't wait to read more. Thank you!

The author created believable characters and a realistic context. The title does tell us where the story is headed, but that does not in the slightest detract from this start, which teases the reader. I love that Beverly takes such good care of her body and goes to the gym regularly. She is very horny and obviously wants to look as sexy as possible, even if her husband has apparently lost al interest in her. And in the background is Alison, her daughter. Love it.

What Ambul said X2!!!

THANK YOU for a fun story!! I'm looking forward to the rest.

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!

Paul

This was a good change of spice then what I usually read on Lit. You have Bev all ribbed up to go for it. Hope next chapter is a winner.