Five Dates Ch. 04

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It might not be manly to cry, but at that moment, the loss of Nancy and now knowing that I'd also lost Donna was more than I could handle. It came out in long, horrible sobs. I wanted Nancy back so badly.

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Thanks for the story. I hate to say it, but it was kinda obvious in the previous chapter that neither Trish the Reminder of Loss nor Donna the Insatiable are going to work out. Despite that, I liked the journey, in particular things Trish and Michael found out about their own sexuality.

OGHMNWOGHMNW7 months ago

WOW, It sure did get wild and crazy at work. Liz is the only one with a valid claim for Michael. Michael’s suggestion for Julie (HR) to visit the club only has one flaw, that photos & video recording likely aren’t allowed and hard to hide on a nude body. Yes, Darleen has a crush on Michael but can handle it better knowing that he cares. Donna tried her best and Sandra tried to help sway Michael but in the end he has a BIG Issue with Donna’s sexual needs. Maybe they can still be friends with solo benefits at times. It’s good to see Trisha there to catch Michael as he falls after this heartbreak again. Thank You and on to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

OOps! Little bit of a problem in the story.

He drove to Donna's and then they dropped him off at his house. Where is his car? How does he get it back? Next chapter starts with him going back to work. Looked at the 16 comments at time of me commenting and no mention of this problem.

Not criticizing the story, just pointing out a hole in the story logic. I'm enjoying the series.

rRC

> I went home to an empty house after work. I was partly tempted to call Trish, but I knew that the next morning I was headed off with Donna and her friends. Instead I called Donna and she was more than happy for me to head over and spend the night with her. I grabbed some dinner on the way and showed up at her house a little after seven. I wasn't surprised to find her naked, and within a few

> They all came back and I could see that Donna was trying hard not to cry. We packed the gear in the car and climbed in, Donna sitting next to me. She leaned against me the whole drive home. I knew what she was thinking, or at least I was pretty sure I did. When they dropped me at the house she got out with me, still naked, and walked to the door. She wrapped herself around me as much as she could and kissed me tenderly.

>"Thank you for trying," she whispered. She broke the hug and walked back to the car. As they drove away I could tell she was sobbing in the back seat.

DuncanitaDuncanita11 months ago

I'm SO hoping that Trish and Michael are the onesbthat get together... that he realises that she isn't Nancy and "discovers" that his feelings for her are true love (again)...

rbloch66rbloch6611 months ago

What I don't understand is why Michael didn't end it when it started feeling not right for him. He knew that they would be compatible, but I think he was hung up on wanting someone to love. Where he went wrong is when he started compromising his values. Plus he needed to learn to say no to women who pushed him, rather than trying to be the nice guy.

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