All Comments on 'Five Dates Ch. 10'

Good conclusion!

5

I was still rooting for Trish but that wasn't your fantasy. Great story thanks for sharing.

Cheers

SAGE

I loved the series and gave it five stars and a favorite point! However, I felt that the final chapter was a little short in comparison with the other chapters.

I loved this tale - the whole thing.

Thank you!

I really didn't like this story as much as some of this Authors other stories. He a damn good Author but this to me just turned out to be a 10 chapter suck and fuck with a little bit of life in between. 3 STARS.,

Great story, great writing!

I agree with Sex4lf57 that the previous chapters were great but the last one not so much. Easy for me to say as the reader BT it is your story. I have rad most of your work and appreciate the hard work in making them come to fruition.

Nice conclusion. I like that he chose Liz I think Trish would always remind him of his wife.

Thanks for writing

Loved the story but the conclusion was a bit short.

A bunch of us knew that you did not intend to have Trish be the one, even though we were rooting for her, about half way through these chapters. but we knew it was your story, your fantasy, and we stuck around because the story was well written, and we wanted to see who you chose.

I wish it had been Trish, but Liz was a good second choice.

Hope to read that other story you talked about in the end.

great story. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing

To the author don't listen to all the people telling you this story was good. The first part was good it went to scrap on part two forward. Any editor that you s halfway decent would have told you to have Trish go last and the way she was written there was no way he would not have ended up with her. The story fails when you have the character totally change his life style. Sorry people in their later hears do not change that drastically. They are set in certain patterns and rarely deviate much and certainly not as much as this character did. The whole fertility clinic fiasco really set the tone for the story to deviate to insanity instead of a.believable tale. Try again maybe bedtime split this story into three different stories with other leading males. Because basically that what you should have done instead of lumping it all into one giant mess of a story.

I enjoyed many of your other stories. I did not enjoy this one. You had an excellent premise and beginning to the story, but it progressively went downhill. The way this ended feels like you got tired of it and just threw something together for the sake of ending it.

Unsatisfying story, and way too many loose ends.

I really rooted for trish...

Totally disappointed in the ending. But I won't spoil his choice. As for other men, selfish bastard. 4+5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️½ to all the other parts

i sure thought trish was the one from the beginning . very disappointed in the ending .

Excellent

this story wandered all over the place, the author attempted to evade predictability, but instead lost the story line, again in meaningless sex. A shame, I think the author has talent, but squanders it.

Was hoping Trish would be the choice. She had loved him for a long time. Michael probably loved her for the same length of time.

You are a great writer. Thanks for putting all the time and effort into this long tale. I too was rooting for Trish as she was more traditional and more what he was used to. Donna and Liz were way to radically different and hard to believe that he would be so, mostly, comfortable with their shenanigans. You even hinted multiple times that he didn’t like the hijinks but he still ended up with Liz. The ending, as written didn’t make sense to me. Still, good enough for me to give this story 4 stars! Please keep on keeping on!

I was hoping Trish, Liz, and Rose would all set up housekeeping together, sharing our stalwart stallion. I really enjoyed the story.

The way the characters were written it had to be Liz. He rescued his wife and he had to do the same for Liz. Trish was a copy of his wife it would have never worked, Donna was too radical and unchanging, Rose was the best well rounded out of all but was treated as a passing fling sadly. As an engineer he has to fix broken things it's his passion so in the end it had to be Liz. Multiple women in a marriage is a nice fantasy but as the old saying goes-Too many cooks spoil the stew. fun to read though. I could never share my wife or lover with another man either, another woman nice fantasy but what is mine is mine and what is her is her break that rule and jealousy ensues love dies and bitterness invades

Your story and characters went where they went. I never really grew to like or respect the MC. By my read, he was a bit of a wimp and women in general and his wife in particular had him whipped most of the time. He gave Donna and Liz many more chances than he gave to Trish or others. He didn't like to be a cuck but chose to be one for the two women he tried to build a relationship with. Strange. I enjoyed or was more interested in a number of the women rather than so much time with Donna and Liz. So, I enjoyed your writing and many parts of the story but prefer some of your other stories more. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Thank You for this Wonderful Hot Lengthy Erotic Romance. It does appear that Michael and Elizabeth have a lot to share. Being Work Associates helped to create the closeness that grew into Love. Thank You!!!

I thought Trish would have made the best wife. Clearly Liz still wanted strange cock.

I question the values and morals of the author.

After loosing one’s wife exposing Michael to so many unworthy low life’s in this story reflects the need for psychological treatment for the author and Michael.

Hmm my leaning was towards Trish.

She obviously had feelings for the MC all the way through but still respected the marriage boundaries.

Something in LIT that is a rare find.

Ending was wack. Liz was a ho. Trish was wifey material.

I read this whole story and I didn't see any reason for him to settle down with Liz or any of the other women. The writer took great pains to construct a man who was totally devoted to his dead wife and then he went off on his own "fantasy tangent" and down a rabbit hole that only Elmer Fudd would pay attention to.... The story was for the most part a aimless, rambling orgy that had little meaning as the male M/C skipped from one woman to another; rejected a life style and then let the story put him in a a relationship that was the antithesis of his "love of my life marriage". All dribble and no scoring. 2.5

If this is romance then Popeye is a sissy.