All Comments on 'Five Dollar Bill'

It sounds to me like Dave and Janice did pretty much what Jerry expected, maybe even wanted.

Now, THAT is an uncommon storyline. Delightful, filled with interesting twists, but finishing with some very entertaining results.

Write on!

Pleasant Too soft. Too predictible.

does not a valid contract make. In god we trust should have said something. TK U MLJ LV NV

rather predictable.. put a HORNY man and women together nature takes it cource..

it to be really in the wrong category.... which one it belongs to, I don't know, but not this one, that's for sure. 3

weak

wrong category, all of your stories are so predictable.

WTF? A wimp husband and a cheating slut story does NOT sound Romantic to me. But then who knows what this writer thinks is Erotic or Romantic. This is just another sad and depressing story of a cheating slut and a wimp who really has no balls.

Well done story, a nice short enjoyable tale

Very good story, Amigo! Cinco Estrellas!

I was pulling for Janice and him to get together all through the story, and it finally happened in an unusual way.

A happy ending is always so nice.

Thanks for the very good story

Romance, what Romance???

A cheating wife

Untrustworthy best friend

A bastard Daughter

Romance? Hell NO.

Did Not like this story at All

these are just the cliff notes for the actual story, right?

as usual. Jerry meant that she was to be taken care of, and she was, nothing more and nothing less. Enjoyed it and found it close to real life.

Such miserable ******s? This was a decent read and fully meets the romance category. If anything, It could have a little longer. Nice job though.

and if the owner is facing foreclosure its worse, TK U MLJ LV NV

It is the principle of course -

As for a cheating spouse - none in this story - she was sent over with the expectation they would have sex - Jerry said so and explained they did it a lot so she would need it better with him etc. - the child - a pleasant side effect she did not get pregnant before foolish people tend to accept that means she could not -

While there are strange aspects it seemed pretty straight forward - few surprises - Jerry knew she liked him and would have used him to exact revenge if he cheated again - sent her anyway to have sex and live.

BTW let's not forget neither she nor Jerry claimed to love the other so no one should be surprised that love did crop up (they both said so in the story so I am not making an unfounded assumption).

I think it was well crafted and written thanks -

glad they got together after the ass hole husband screwed up his own world...what you get for being greedy and he wanted his wife to be taken care of and she was...well and truly...what else did they expect to happen....she found happiness.....mirrors life and its realities....nice one....

How could he have expected anything different after loaning his wife To a single guy.