by Nikkiejanes
Superb, highly erotic and beautifully crafted. Thanks for a great read, I’m very hard now as a result and my wife will appreciate it greatly. We’re going to fuck ourselves senseless after reading your story together.
Great story Nikkie. Very exciting and very erotic. I can't help to be jealous of Neil. I gave you 5 stars.
What a fantastic story, descriptive hot and intelligent. Loved the interplay between the two women both before they got into bed on a mental level and also in bed on a physical level. Loved the threesome scenes which were both hot and erotic.
A very well written story that I would give six stars to if I could.
Started very well but soon got very predictable and cliched. Would have been better if Neil had been left sitting in the bar and the girls went off on their own.