All Comments on 'Flasher!'

This was a humorous story even with the infidelity.

Hope she doesn't screw up again since he can now shoot a pistol!!

This little gem belongs in the Humor section.

Nice little comedy of sexual errors; the way she attacks his back with her claws, you could slip in some BDSM to avoid the damage.

Great laughs here.

Touches of your style but unreal in most regards. Not up to your self imposed bar.

The character respect was lacking and the reconciliation was contrived. Puzzling effort for you.

with some Regard

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my god i hate myself for reading this crap

Be careful what you wish for -

He set it up - he pushed her buttons - he built the scenarios and watched her respond - he did NOT make it clear what the limits were - of course he was not all that sure what they were either -

He got what he deserved so did she - a real scare - she clearly had as little respect for him as he often had for her - good pair - good luck

Fine effort -

Storiescas MGM one is bound to get zircons amongst the gems.

PLAY BECOMES REALITY THEN THE SHIT HITS THE FAN.....SHE KNEW WHAT SHE WAS DOING AS SHE TURNED FANTASY IN TO REALITY BY FUCKING THE OTHER GUY....BASICALLY A SLUT.....HE SHOULD HAVE DUMPED HER....

always claim that they are not? He was the biggest wimp on the planet. She was just a slut! Always was. The tag line asked, 'Was she his own creation?' Simple answer; no. She got off on being a cheating cunt. If he asked her to go shooting at a range, is he responsible if she walks into a school and wipes out a classroom? If he asked her to go for a drink, is he responsible if she later goes and gets drunk, gets in her car and mows down some pedestrians? I think not. We are all the people we want ourselves to be. Everything else is just denial and excuses.

Very entertaining read.

Liked NOTHING about the story.

Not very good, except for the.shooting. At least he scared them.

It's kind of funny as hell in a masochistic kind of way. A little voyeurism is fun and exciting. As much as they do is a recipe for disaster.

As a councilor, I can tell you that this sort of thing is a true keystone to failure. It seldom ends well. The story was done well and creative .