All Comments on 'Folk Music'

I enjoyed your story.

I hope you choose to continue the tale. I was surprised, though, that you missed the old cliche about the two of them making sweet music, together...

Somehow you got the atmosphere just right! Two regular people enjoying their first time as lovers. And making it sexy as hell! Without all of the cliches that infect so many other stories. I loved this! More, please!

Enjoyed reading it.

But some words used are weird. What the heck is a pledge break? Had she recorded it the college sorority channel?

He must have an extremely long tongue to think he was in her womb. A foot long tongue would be really wow, and make him very popular with the girls.

The person who asked about a pledged break has obviously not watched much public television.

Some of the dialogue during sex was waaay out there. Yearning uterus? Selfish cervix? Really?