All Comments on 'Follow The Rules'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 5 years ago
Enjoyed the kickback at end

A new heir to the manor ? It would serve the dubious duo right to sweat 💦 it out the DNA test and rights to sign child support checks for 18 years. Enjoyed the story as per almost always.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 5 years ago
Brilliant

This is one of your best! The build up was slower than usual, which added a lot to the story. You write so well. Thanks! -- JB

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 5 years ago
One of your best!

I liked the setting and the slow buildup to her punishment. It could have been a punishment followed by a reward, no? Anyway, it was well written as always, and enjoyable, too.

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