All Comments on 'For The Love of Adele'

with a good slow build up and excellently written sex scenes!

The characters properly devloped, and all in all a really fine story. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I love the Characters, it was well written, an plotted.

All though I don't normally get into alot of incest storys, I loved this one!. It was well written and captured my imagination.

You didn't write it like most of the incest storys that I have read, You made it trully beleavable.

My hat is off...Thanks...Great read!

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It was actually interesting (something you don't see much of in this genre) and flowed nicely. You made the characters real enough that they were worth caring about!

Geronimo...an amazing story. I felt as though I was a part of the story and felt their pleasure and pain. Great Work!

you made me cry...

GA...charger was right on...what an absolutely amazing story! I was gripped by your writing from the very start...so, so good...I loved it! ~shykitty~

Wonderful story and so descriptive. The bar scene, with the three men surrounding Adele - I definitely felt the danger, the real possibility that it would end very badly. Great slow build up, the embarrassment, angst, and then finally the consummation. <br><br>

I needed a good bedtime story tonight - thanks!

loved the whole tale about the cruise and her nearly getting in to trouble - the guy was a bit of a jerk up to this point. What gets me is the fact that in many of the sex scenes it always starts with the woman giving a blow job!! WHY? In all my experiences that always came later after exploring the ladies body and giving her a good sucking and licking before fucking them - a blow job came later as - to me any way - it is always important for the man to pleasure the woman first and pay attention to her having a good time and enjoying the love making then - and only then - is it time for her to pleasure the man in whatever way she finds enjoyable - a lot of women don't give a blow job until later. nice story and very believable.

Loved it.Way to go.

Earlier comments have said pretty much all that I would say about your superb story. You're a heck of a fine writer; not only realistic but very erotic; far beyond just another stroke story. Thanks!

Beautifully written and well executed, nice build up although couldn't you have sent the poor sods to somewhere warmer than Alberta? Like Vancouver?

Who did you piss off that is not person enough to post their personal attacks at you as themselves, but has to post anonymous. This douche bag has slammed a whole bunch of your stories tonight. I wouldn't listen to anything they have to say. You are a great writer. Can't wait to see what you write next.

I found this story a while ago then lost it, and just found it again. Beautifully written and very believeable. Thanks.

beautiful pacing, rich fucking and believable plot

My second reading of this story. So touching.

The trolls, morons, rightbank, all make this site toxic and not worth posting too. I urge you, geronimo, and other authors to take your excellent and high quality work to another site - one with a more deserving readership and community.

Amazing, beautiful, believable! I love everything about this story.

I like your style Mr Appleby always a good read, as I have said before, you have the knack of weaving a story not just an endless tide of fuck fuck fuck. Most enjoyable.

Please correct the mistake.

There was fifteen years difference between my mother and her sister

and

there was ten years difference between my mother and my aunt