All Comments on 'Fresh Off The Bus 4 Ch. 01'

I would read your stories several times a month and wait anxiously for when you would return. The fact that you have come back to us, makes people like me...your fans feel as if you care. I would have to say I have loved all your work so far and I hope you continue.

Thank you again.

A True Fan of the Stormbringer

Even though it was TOO DAMN LONG, this was one of the best I've ever read.

"Reverend Albert Sharpspeare does what Sharpspeare does. Within days after the pageant, he was off to Alabama where a black teenage girl had been called a water buffalo by white students at an all girls school. The white girls were taught the error of their ways."

Maybe, if it's all right with you, you can write a story based on the theme above.

Fucking degenerate nigger ! Maybe good as a fertilizer.

..."he was do back in NY"; "more THAN" instead of "more then"; and "I love you TOO" instead of "I love you to" but "I wouldn't expect you TO" instead of "I wouldn't expect you too". Regards,

Bobbie Sue Kindle

PS: I have to say Marsha was exactly my taste, but the end was a little bit letting me down.

Who in the world still speaks like that, "n-----r, only good for fertilizer" or some such nonsense. I pity you.

I enjoyed the time spent reading your piece. Thanks for taking the time to write it.

for anyone into well endowed black men and sexy white teens or woman ya'll gotta read the writr shoguon this site....dude this was ok, but it didnt ring no bells....read shoguy .....sinful higclass mom and hs senior and black principal...the best of this type

Best story out of the whole Fresh off the Bus Saga. The whole series was great.

The most over the top piece of drek I ever read. If it wasn't for the surrealistic humor it wouldn't any redeeming qualities at all

I love these long and slow seduction stories. Really looking forward to see what you write next.

Brilliant. Some of your stories could definitely fall under NonConsent/Reluctance categories. Wish you would write some in that category.

These are so hot, and I love how there are so many stories happening in this - Do you post the stories from other people that take place at this pageant?

The best interrational story I ever read. Well written . I think all little white girls should be trained little on by their mothers to understand the benefits of black cock for when they become of age .

Love these stories

22 pages is insane. I just need to get off not read a damn book.