All Comments on 'Frigate Cove Ch. 03-04'

As always your characters build nicely. Just wanted more....

Can't get enough.

Not sure - you write well - characters are well developed; but this is literotica not a beach book romance. Needs a bit of something erotic - even if in the reflections looking back.

A lot of stories, in here, (LITEROTICA) get started, and never finished. I get it, life gets in the way. BUT! WE, the readers are left hanging. I'm liking this story to!

Robert.

He seems at a loss for words when it's criticaly important.

You are an author well known to your fans. There are a lot of interesting twists down the road I am sure. At least fifty per cent of the gals in this situation would be invading his bed. If they continue in this relationship, what happens when she needs a man??

character development and the background to the erotic gymnastics. There are only so many ways of "doing it" but an infinite variety of humans and their emotions and desires. Plus for some reason I'm a sucker for stories with kids in the middle or a romance stories.