All Comments on 'Games People Play Ch. 05'

From bad to worse!

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Interesting progression. Also interesting backstory on Tom. It makes me a little worried about Abby, though, and feel a little worse about her in general. Likely this was a bit of retcon in order to make what Abby did feel like an okay response, but if Tom was already breaking vows and being dishonest (unless he was just telling Abby that he was having sex with strippers), then why would she expose her friends to his behavior?

Anyway, the Dare app is always an interesting plot device. I just hope that it doesn't all go sideways for Alex and Judy.

Seriously goofy and awkwardly shoehorned in attempt at a retroactive continuity fix to that psychotic kidnapping and unlawful imprisonment "payback" in the previous chapter. Otherwise an entirely adequate chapter, not much to comment on.

Kidnapping:

You are in violations of these laws if you are guilty of all of the following:

Moving another person a substantial distance

Without his or her consent

By using using force (inflicting physical force upon them) or fear (threatening to physically harm them)

I wish it would have continued with Abby.

Very good story not the best not the worst.

Is it finished?

It's a provocative story line. The inherent conflict of a reluctant wife with a husband that is willing to explore and push boundaries without upsetting the wife. Will she give in to more and more temptation?

I hope the author continues this tale.