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by Lost Boy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amateur effort

The sex is ok, but your storytelling skills are on par with a 12 year old's. Learn what a "plot" is, as well as how to build toward a climax (no pun intended) instead of just posting your whack-off fantasies - you're too impatient to even finish one storyline before rushing to the next.

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22-08-23 Sorry for the extremely long hibernation. My heart attack and recovery have hit me harder than expected. To be honest, it will likely be a bit before I continue. I am struggling with meds and coherent thought at the moment. I'll do my best to continue with stories alr...