All Comments on 'GG's, Like in Maggie Ch. 01'

Welcome back Talkman. I am so pleased that there is a new story from you. I am going to wait for you to post all five parts and then will have a marathon reading over the coming weekend. I hope there are some new twists in the plot of your new story.

cannot wait for the rest. it cannot some soon enough

finally you are back. dont let us waiting for to long

Maggie so far makes a great addition to whatever you would call you'r rogues gallery, loving how much in her head in this one and in my opinion how different the story is in a-lot of aspects.

Great set up can't wait for more!

Should have been in Humor and satire. Just awful.

Looking forward to the next part. It's always a nice surprise when one of your favourite authors posts a new story.

...although I'd have preferred it if there was some incest involved. Obviously, I don't know exactly where you're going with this (although I have a pretty good idea) but six pages and no proper fucking seems odd. There should always be room for character and plot development - but we would like some actual sex thrown in. Hopefully chapter two will be a bit more 'action-packed'.

Can't wait for next part love it

No fuckin' gets you a 4.

And why is this in the NonConsent/Reluctance category?

Awesome start though. Really looking forward to chp. 2.

Some people are issing the point when they say there's no payoff, the corruption is more insidious here.

Love the buildup, hope the next chapter is edited/posted soon.

Keep up the good work!

Can't wait for part 2, amazing story

It's embarrassing how much I look forward to your stories TM, keep up the good work.

very good but what size is Kathleen s tits

very good ,what size have kathleen

Maggie Hewitt is a disgusting, despicable character. I won't bother to finish reading this terrible story. 2*