All Comments on 'Gift of Time'

why does time freeze always get categorised as MC? What's the connection? Their mind is decidedly unaffected.

5 stars from me!

Liked the story, your writing and well the entire idea of it.

If I was a teenage boy, hahaha I'm not, I would have done the same thing!

Good writing feels effortless...

Well done! I'll go and see your other stories.

Josie

I know that stories with High School kids can be about petty pay back and other non mature topics, that being said I hope that this does not wind up being just about that. There are a lot of ways this story can go. Instead of just getting even or revenge, how about using this new ability to get a girl friend or two? In any case please keep writing this story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I really hope this gets a sequel. Maybe he impregnates her and she thinks it one of they guy's that bullies him.