All Comments on 'Going to the Beach'

Hawaii is in the North Pacific

Really put me off especially when I grabbed your cock....better written about you and someone else, not you and me.

This is a brilliant love story, with a good buildup and a proper introduction. While character development could have been a little longer, the story certainly qualifies as a wonderful romance story, whose only flaw is its brevity. Obviously unfinished, the story certainly needs a sequel.