All Comments on 'Halloween Party Chaperone'

One of the best stories I have read on this site; thanks for having written it.

Your story was extremely well written and very well told!

Well done. One of the best stories I have ever read.

I've been waiting patiently for your next submission. Well done!

Excellent... great writing and hot story. One of the best I've ever read on this site. Thanks for sharing and for all the hard work.

This is probably the best story that I have ever read in this catagory. I was never turned on as much as I was by this one. I look forward for more of this one

Fantastic story. Please write more.

I have given you a '00' for very good reason. This story, like many others is nothing short of fantasy. In fantasy there is no birth control. The Pill fucked up this story badly. There is no cause for mentioning it and the suspense would have been much more erotic if it had not been mentioned. I don't know why some writers can write an outstanding story and then place birth control of some sort in it. You had a very good basis for a father knocking up his daughter as the daughter is living with her mother after the divorce, and it is obvious that the father and daughter get along exceptionally well and could make an excellent Mommy and Daddy together to go on and make more siblings for this baby.

For those of you that don't like my rating of this story or these comments, go and read your Holy Bible or watch a John Wayne movie.

Liked the story just fine, having a child with your daughter would be a disaster, one that a father would not put his daughter through. If little don below fucked something besides blow up dolls or klenex he might have a clue. To have such a strong fetish he should raise a couple of other mens children, or perhapes he is. Keep writing responsible stories, thanks.

Are you mad? The majority of these stories while fictional have a real world setting. As such the authors discretion in characters contraception seems perfectly rational. Thanks anyway for drawing my attention to a fine story. UK CYNIC.

Very well written and very erotic. Well done. I wish the editors would not allow 00 ratings, especially from jerks like Don87654 who substitute their opinions for the author's. No story that passes editorial muster deserves such a low rating. Don87654 is a spoiler, unpleasant, untalented and not very intelligent.

Very well written and very erotic. Well done. I wish the editors would not allow 00 ratings, especially from jerks like Don87654 who substitute their opinions for the author's. No story that passes editorial muster deserves such a low rating. Don87654 is a spoiler, unpleasant, untalented and not very intelligent.

Not your garden variety Halloween contest entry, that's for sure. Very nicely done!

Very hot! I'm trying this at home! Now just have to get a playboy type girl for a daughter and all her friends to come over for a costume party!

This story was very well-written. The intro before the sex was lengthy, but not boring--it heightened the suspense. As for Don, it's easy to make such stupid comments while sitting in the cheap seats. I read your bio; you have no submissions. Why open an account if you are not going to contribute. You are like the typical down-voting trolls who, unfortunately, seem to infest every web community.

Mmmmm....that was so hot! Just the right build up of sexual tension for the perfect finale!

Just what I needed...lol My legs ache now, that was amazing and my body thanks you:)

I MIGHT let my husband read this one with me... or maybe not...

that was a fantastic story! i hope there is more to it...a part 2 maybe with Melissa joining the fun...that would make this a delicisous story indeed!

keep up the great work!

Very well done . Ignore the morons with their self centered comments , they're probably either homosexual or child molesters .

Great job on the tension, gradual buildup, and lovely details in the story. Would love to read more about Dad's adventures with his daughter and friends.

This story is so hot, that I had to go and change my soaked panties. Nice job... thanks.

Excellent job the lead up was exquisite!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Don you're telling a father to knock up his daughter then tell us to go read the bible? Can you spell hyprocrite? LOL

Kudos to the author! This was incredible. I'm extremely turned on right now (I'm female). This was SO sensual and erotic. Loved the Dom/sub feel too. And loved the build up, it was perfect; not too short and not too long. It's great to see authors here patient and willing to put effort into the foreplay instead of writing 3 lines of an intro then getting to the fucking. I'm bookmarking this and will read it again and again, yum!! :)

Loved the CopDad/sluttydaughter story line...it's right up my alley! Thanks for the work break.

xoxo

all I can say is it was damn good. lol.

I enjoyed this story as much as anything on Literotica, regardless of the genre. As another stated, I would like to see how far this storyline could be developed. Keep up the great writing !!

Awesome story, whew! What a build up! And the Climax was blow the top off, Great!

This story left me hot and bothered. Oh, where's my daddy when I need him?

AFTER READING SOME VERY NICE COMMENTS & ONE FROM A NUT, EYE JUST HAD TWO ADD MY OWN THOUGHTS ...OVER THE YEARS EYE HAVE DISCOVERED THAT THOSE AUTHORS THAT ARE REALLY GOOD AT PUTTING A STORY TOGETHER THAT CAPTIVATES ONES INTERESTS & ATTENTION..ALL SHARE SOMETHING INN COMMON..(THEY ALL WRITE TO SLOW)SEW IF YOU WOOD PLEASE ENROLL INN A SPEED TYPING CLASS >> BECAUSE EYE AM READY FOUR SOME MORE OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS...ALL-SEW THE PILL GAVE IT A TOUCH OF REALISMEXCELLENT JOB,& THANK YOU FOE SHARING

That was hot!!!! Now I'm just waiting for Daddy to get home to take care some of this ache that you started.

Delicious tension rising between them but next story should be of a party with all of his friends where he shares her... a party favor... just a thought

I thought this was soooo sexy. It was well written, excellent buildup. You had me dripping the entire time, waiting for him to finally get that cock into her. I loved the tit play too. Sam's schoolgirl outfit really turned me on, since I'm also really into teacher/student sex. So yeah, this is by far one of the sexiest stories I've read. By the time I finished there was a huge puddle of cum on the seat.

This was one of the best stories I have read in this section of the stories realistic, well written was this an actual experience? It was written so convincingly I would say yes !

Thanks for writing this and sharing with us

FoxyLadyAnn

I loved every aspect: the slow build-up,the deep feelings developing between the protagonists, the sensual foreplay, the passionate sex. A great story from one of my favourite authors. Good job!

Loved the story! It was actually rather unique too! Dad was progressively forward once he realized what his daughter wanted, which was awesome,not another guy acting like a twelve year old when approached!

So fucking hot.

One of the hottest stories EVER !!!

Loved the idea of putting the father in the costume of an authoritarian figure, thought it would have worked better if he had stayed in character the entire time and was addressed as officer and not Daddy.

great story...the long, slow build up...dominance....spanking... what more could a girl want??!!

5*s

So fucking hot and the sexiest story I’ve read!!! Thanks for the recommendation! Can’t wait to read your other stories!!!

....and so expertly written. I loved it.

Full marks for ending the Melissa drama before it started.

I'm not so much into the dom/sub scene but since it was offered in a rather low key format it gave the story an acceptable format. I do wish, though, you hadn't teased me by having dad put the baton on her pussy without actually inserting it. Oh well, a good story otherwise . . .