All Comments on 'Happy Halloween'

Took me a while to figure out that 'BOWELS' is American for 'bowls'! I shit through mine, as in 'opening the bowels' once a day is a very healthy thing to do. Which reminds me ........!!

Humor - both intended and not intended propels this story into the realm of the hilariously funny. One thing comes through loud and clear - the two daughters are in charge! Amusing!

Good luck with the contest!

even in the United States. It was disconcerting but I got used to it.

...should leave writing to educated people, and stick to Jerry Springer reruns!

I absolutely loved this story. The vernacular and spelling could be better but it was one of the best if not the best story on here. I loved the way the girls used the moms at the party. It was a new and exciting spin on all the sex stories on literotica. THX

I liked this piece. The creativity in the use of the Halloween party motiff as a theme for the debauching of the girl's mothers got me hard (I prefer to have imagination in my porn.)

I like that you just skipped straight into the dom.daughter/sub.mother incest subsubsubgenre and bypassed any sort of awkward "how did it get to be like this" exposition. I hate having to wade through a page and a half to get to the good stuff when I'm looking for DdsMi porn. I'm also intrigued by the apparant existence of a community wide lesbian incest social network. There's potential there.

Ultimately I'd like to see more holiday fuckery. Thanksgiving dinner alone could give you enough material for a two parter. If you can pull off a good obscene fuckparty for a more atyipcal holiday like Arbor Day or Passover, I'll tip my hat to you.

All in all, a pretty good romp in naughtiness. Rube Goldberg would either be pleased or horrified, but I woun't speak for him.

You spelled bowl wrong four times, like "bowel" as in "bowel movement." Gross!

One is a kitchen tool. The other is disgusting!

I loved this story and would like more of the girls and their mom's

Hilarious.

Ok, the spelling of bowls was amusing but if I'm not sure on the spelling of a word I use Google. Also if I'm researching a story I would use Google.

Sheiks do not wear turbans. They wear a keffiyeh. See it works but I suppose as an Ameican you think anyone from East of Europe are all Ay-Rabs or Mooselems.