All Comments on 'Help for our "little problem" Pt. 02'

Delete this shit

Just way over the top ridiculous.

one star

But as long as you put this trash here, we will call it what it is, garbage. Nothing erotic about treating someone like an animal. It’s not funny and certainly not sexy. Seek help.

Switching categories to LW is never good. Not only did this get a one, gave Part 1 a one also,

And barely even that.

There’s no love, she humiliates him, makes him clean up her cream pies, does nothing for him. So how are they dating? Seriously. There’s no “actual” live being displayed. When Beth said that Jakes was her boyfriend, it was the only thing that indicated they were dating, hell, shes dating Kevin more than Jake.

So if you’re going to make this a cuckold relationship, there has to be something there and there isn’t.

('Going through', 'cause, really, who can actually read such garbage?)

Questions like:

• Why is he with her?

• Why is she with him?

• Doesn't Jake has any friends and/or family member that could help him get out of this sick situation?

• Doesn't Keith and Mark realize that most of their actions here make them look, at best, like a bunch of closeted queens just waiting for a REAL MAN to turn them completely gay, just as they're trying to turn Jake?

• Who could possibly find bullies picking on an obviously mentally ill person the least bit erotic?

You know, the usual.

But the biggest question that story evokes, actually THE question that always comes up every time any author try to pull off such a dumb move:

Why the fuck did Luv4hotwives took this out of Fetish to put it in LW?

I honestly do not understand that. Especially given that no character in this story is even is remotely close to be married.

... My only guess? The author moved it here, so he could get his own dose of humiliation, just like his MC. Kinda sick, but hey - mental illness.

Go seek some help, buddy.

why are you still there stupid if it is your house or appt then toss the whore to the road s well as her friends if they give you a problem call the cops get rid of them all if you stay they will be doing your ass next

Actually you should have stayed at home. This was awful.

There needs to be a zero star check to show a negative score and NO stars. Showing yes, I somewhat read this garbage and don't want to dirty my marker.

Also, a warning that appears IN the story -- after people have opened the story -- is worthless.

You must have a really tiny weenie to write a story like this. Or maybe you're the fat chick that hates men now because you never got invited to prom? Whatever the case, I hope writing stories like this makes you feel powerful or maybe relieves a little pain from your pathetically sad existence. If not, you really need to see someone, get some help. Everybody deserves to be happy and you obviously aren't.

I';m unsure what to make of this. There NEEDS to be a reason a person lives in the humiliating state the queer author describes. I know the majority of these cuck-authors are closet homosexuals, and "that is fine, our best friends are queer as a $3 bill" as they say... I just don't understand the need to "write" such a spineless documentary of idiocy. If the "relationship" is soooo one sided, find a new one more to your liking. Apparently being a housekeeper for a young slut is enough for some "males" (usually California or Seattle types. In the old days it was easy to prove that the sun was baking away their common sense, but now with the NW being included, we can only surmise that the Pacific is poisoned since Japan is having similar problems).

It is sad that artistic reflection has only reflected the bad parts of the human existence. I long for respite from the drudgery of the same old shit, once again written by a new contributor who believes they have the license to make us vomit.

Smokepole

Gay sex. One star.

Give this guy a spine please.

Really bad, doesn't belong in LW. Actually it doesn't belong anywhere but the deleted file.

Not even good gay sex. I absolutely detest humiliation sex or play. It isn't funny nor fun for anyone but an asshole. Grow up.

love it, very hot. Probably post in fetish though.

Jake is one lucky little cum eating sissy. He should never be able to fuck his girl anymore. He needs to suck, swallow and get fucked regularly up his man pussy.

Second chapter was a big disappointment! This story started out great and you took it down the wrong direction, too bad. I won't bother to read anymore of this crap. 2nd chapter 1*.

I liked the first half of the first chapter, but when it became clear that this story wasn’t going to present any sort of loving relationship, or one based on mutual respect and trust, I lost most of my interest. I only wondered if the story would evolve into a redemption story which could very well save it, or just go the same way most of these pieces do.

I’m not trying to belittle the effort, it just isn’t what I’m looking for and it can be a little frustrating panning for gold and finding little to show for it.

NO redeeming value. Somehow there has to be something

even though i love cuck stories ...this has gone a bit too far .. and remember.. Kevin is not the only guy with 9 inches cock in the world. But what i hate most is unfinished stories pls continue writing.

Just a stupid as the first part now cucky is queen. Be a man stand up for yourself. I will never forget what my oldest brother taught me and his sons that were not much younger than me. If the person you are to fight is bigger tougher what ever do something to equalize it the best you can and don't let them get the first punch in you might not be able to take it. I was only 5 foot 7 and 115 lbs my girlfriend was 5 foot 6 and 100 lbs. I had uncles and older that taught karate wrestling Tae Kwon Do and boxing. My girlfriend Jeanne and I were out one night at a party have fun with some friends. Later there was a group of the football players that came in they were the jocks of the football team. They all thought that they were the ladies men of the school. All of us normal kids try to ignore their arrogance. As the party went on some of the guys from the football team were asking different girls to dance. Shortly while we were all visiting and moving around to different friends having a good time one of the jocks Bill asked Jeannie to dance and I guess she wanted to or she would not have been dancing with Bill it was a fast song so it wasn't like he was all over her. For sure I wouldn't tolerate that. A friend Joe came over and said hey Dave keep an eye on that snake he's been hitting on Jeannie for a long time trying to get in her pants. He said don't get me wrong I haven't seen Jeannie do anything wrong but he's a snake. I've seen him set up guy making it look like they were cheating by having a girl kissing him then show his girlfriend a picture of the kissing. Then she wants revenge and he will normally get in their pants. Stand your ground Dave and if you need we are here to back you up buddy. The DJ switched to a slow song and Bill pulled Jeannie into a hugg and started dancing like they were a couple. I went quickly as possible to cut in. I tapped Bill on the shoulder saying this is my dance with my lady. The arrogant bastard said piss off little boy. I tapped on his shoulder again ready to duck and it was a good thing because he took a swing at me. I came back at him with 3 as quick as I could to his stomach. He was doubled over. I said go have a seat little boy. Tow of his buddies were there in a flash but 3 of mine were there also. They helped Bill to a chair but he said Dave this isn't over yet. Joe said don't be stupid Bill let it go you finally met more than you can handle. Jeannie said Dave I sorry I should not have accepted when Bill asked to dance but I didn't want to cause a seen and then when the music changed and he more or less grabbed me I sure glad you were there thank you. You are welcome my lady I love you I love you too. Later when we were saying goodbye Joe said wait a minute Mark said he heard talk about Bill and some buddies who are going to jump you outside. We mad a plan. When we left Joe and 4 other guys left different direction and different time's then Jeannie and I went out the normal entrance. On the way I told Jeannie if something happened get back inside as quickly as possible. We weren't out the door 10 feet when Bill yelled hey dick head want to try that again. I said come on let it go you are lucky someone else hasn't beat you worse than that you best leave it alone. You just got lucky and sucker punched me. Dave said let it go Bill. Then Mark said from another direction that would be wise. Then the other guys cleared their throats. Just about then the police pulled up. They talked a while and sent everyone on their way. At school the following Tuesday I heard that Bill cause a seen in the cafeteria and 2 teachers reported it to the principal. Then I heard that some from the party had informed the principal of what happened there. Bill was threatened to be kicked off the football team if there were any other issues. He never threatened Jeannie or any other friends or I. But I did try to stay alert. Jeannie and I married we have 3 children.

Fuuuuuck it’s like this story was written specifically for me! Every part is perfect, bravo!

LOVE THIS

Love this story! Please write Part 3!

Love this story. One of my favorites. Please write another chapter!

Get a new girlfriend, end of discussion.

We really need more parts to this story!