All Comments on 'Her New Neighbor Ch. 09'

Like I said in a comment on the last chapter a couple days ago, I’m not too fond with how this turned out but I’m happy that I’m getting the ball rolling again after a while. Let me know what you think. All comments and reviews are welcomed.

Feelin this chapter my guy. Like how u always write these girls.

... deserves a (short?) happy time with her black lover - after the divorce. By the way I like this story,

If anyone has any feed back or general thoughts to share.

I’m curious, @8796porno, why do you think she deserves a short happy life?

@Jaybeezy: thanks!

Loving your writing and story so far, detailed and graphic, keep up the good work.

My only niggle so far is how is the reveal to her husband gonna happen. "I will claim you" was the hook that got me checking your page week after week for updates.

I feel that scene is going to lose impact now Shannon and Lennox know about the baby

My thoughts concerning your question: It was and is right and natural for likeable Shannon to submit to Lennox. I think she is addicted to BBC and fell in love. Her divorce is a must for me. She and Lennox should talk about her future. Lennox will determine to move in and talk her into the divorce. After the - dirty - divorce - which will leave her almost moneyless - Shannon deserves some happy time with her lover. Lennox will very pamper his white girl to heighten her Submission and love. After that Lennox's plans for her (and her daughter?) will come to reality - whatever these plans are.

@Anon: I thought about hiding the pregnancy from Lennox for a little, but I also felt like if Shannon were to tell anybody right away, it would be Lennox because of how close they’ve become. I’ll see how It goes with Ryan.

@8796pono: oh okay, I got you. I’ll see how far I go into their future. Perhaps I may even end the story and do spin offs or side stories. Not sure what I’ll do yet.

Your story is excellent,

I want to see the how it will be ended

I don't know why, but I like the parts that include the asian girl Sara the best.

@Serrand62: Glad you feel that way. I like all my characters, but personally I like writing Sheri and Sara the best.

I wonder who are everybody’s favorite characters. Let me know!

Good work hon!

More please, it is an awesome series, we want to see if Jason and Sara hook up behind there lovers back, also add that both Julie and Sara are knocked up,

Shannon

@8769porno: Good choice. Care to say what you like about her so much?

Great chapter, as always.

The liberal usage of the word 'nigger' by Sheri was somehow bothersome, doubt. Someone needs to remind that bitch of her place, in all of this.

As I said a while ago, in a previous chapter, black men usually do not share their women with their friends - sure, they would cheat on them, but lose their mind if their chicks ever do the same. That being said, the way it was set up here, swapping girlfriends would be believable... and hot.

Glad your back. Hope you won't be gone again for too long.

@MightyHorny: Glad to have you commenting on my story again. I like writing Sheri as the misguided older woman she is. I think her character will never completely let that go because of how she grew up, but it’s starting to shake now that she’s Allen’s. Hopefully I’ll give a new chapter soon, and we can see what happens with the younger pairs.

If this relationship is on the short side, it might be because the interracial couples have nothing in common apart from sex. it might be interesting to explore this aspect in future chapters, how long can a relationship last that's based purely on lust

Love each chapter although this one was a little short. Like that each couple is defined, but figure some of that will change moving forward. Know how white sluts can get swapped around and they can get jealous

Why you said you were disappointed about this chapter it was kind of weak. You need the Ryan Shannon confrontation to make this a full story. You portray a heavy heavy racism theme throughout but the only win you portray for the black guys is “secretly “ ducking the white girls. The true win is for Ryan to know his wife is done with him and going to live with her Black Baby Daddy. Oh and Shannon should surprise her daughter with a pack of b/c pills.

@NVDiceGuy: Yeah, I’ve written better chapters. I just felt like I went too long without updating that I felt like I needed to give something. Confronting Ryan will come soon, not the next chapter, but you’ll see that it’s coming.

And yeah, I’m about halfway done with chapter 10, just need to find free time to complete it. Just letting everyone know it’s on the way and there won’t be a massive wait like last time.

Great story so far. Would love to see the girls get shared and hook up with each other in the process. Maybe Sam and Jay have some other friends with them hanging out and they all take turns with Sara and Julie. Would be perfect.

I appreciate why Shannon silpped into this very close relationship to Lennox. I also understand her pregnancy - so is live. I think she fell in love (though it is not mentioned in the Story). I also understand not confessing to her husband until now.

great story so far all 9 chapters really great, really loved Shannon's part and would love to see her and her daughter under the same roof. Will there be more and how long will we have to wait

*ATTENTION*

New chapter is awaiting approval. Hopefully it’ll be up soon! I liked it better than the last chapter fwiw so there’s that

Getting on the read! Welcome back!!!

Just keep this story going. I enjoy your style of writing. I love taking white women as well