All Comments on 'Her Thirst Ch. 01'

Didn't do it for me. Dislike stories where one of the characters is always on the back foot. In this case, you lost me at point the sister used the words "I own you."

To me it was just depressing. Not your fault, of course, I'm sure the story will probably rate highly, and that many other readers will love it.

Very hot. hope there is a part 2!

I hope she really punishes him in the next chapter. Spanking and whipping him for starters, along with some humiliation thrown in.

My sister used to let me fuck her ass. She didn't like the idea of getting pregnant but she just loved sucking my cock clean after anal.4

are you going to write more with this story ??? please do .such a hot sister!!!!

Overall a good story. Can go in many directions but in many cases people do not like it when the story is reversed and it is the male being dominant to his sister or mom. Funny how many like it when it is the female being dominant to the male. Kind of two-faced.

Loved that he drove a Corolla. Perfect car for a male loser.

Fantastic! Keep it coming.

Great story , very well written . More please

Hope he gets to cum inside. Maybe they even end up as a couple! stranger things have happened.

love it! great development and very vivid! cant wait for the next adventure !!

Love this!!!!😎💓💓💕💕💑💑😎😇

Well done...want more....please!!!!

First of all I want to thank you for taking thr time and effort to write and pist your stories. I've read two so far, and loved them both. Secondly, I really wish you would ask one of the volunteer editors here on Literotica to check your work. Or at least go over what you've written and fix all the errors where you keep switching the narrative from past tense to present tense. You do it quite often and it really detracts from the stories. Example: going back and forth between "I could" and "I can". Lastly, just a comment on this particular story itself. In my opinion, the brother has to either really enjoy being dominated, or be really "not very bright". If this happened to me, I'd set up my phone or other camera and secretly record my sister dominating me sexually, then show it to her and "reverse blackmail" her. The dad may be pissed about the brother jacking off to his sister in the shower, but what would his reaction be to his daughter forcing his son to fuck her?

This really could be easily extended into an erotic series, if you so desired. A male being dominated has its own attractions and is certainly not without merit as a major theme, I enjoy being the dominant male but I can see the attractiveness of its obverse.

I really enjoyed this piece. Please continue the story it was soooo hot .

This story deff needs more and if treated right could become quite a series... love it if at the end the sister falls for bro....

That was pretty fucking hot! Heh, sister has already fallen for her brother. Honestly she prolly already had a bad crush on him! ...of course I's have let her slide on the first time she hit me, after that, the girl would be butt naked, face down over my lap getting her ass warmed up really good with my hand!

Eve it seems is a Dominant when it comes to her brother Adam,and granted she slapped him 3 or 4 times for not complying quick enough and so forth,but when she told Adam he would be with no other girls,only her that told me she only want Adam.

Now that could be interpreted as posessiveness for Eve to treat Adam like a dog,but again I think its out of love and caring that Eve wants to shape him and mold him to be her brother,pet,and lover so Eve can give both pleasure and pain to Adam so he can appreciate the pleasure more.

Naturally with Adam and Eve I think they make the perfect couple and hope they continue to grow closer to each other so Eve can dominate Adam with punishment and rewards.It is fine in my opinion to like that lifestyle,but if its about total dominance where only pain and punishment are used then that is just so wrong in my book.That is all.

It needs some careful editing. Too many double words in a sentence.

LOL, a virgin?