Herb Garden in the Window

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He almost slipped, almost fell off the wagon five years ago. Honey Breaux, his sweet angel was losing weight, was bruising mysteriously. Whitney took the sixteen year old girl to Dr. Farbacher and he recommended an oncologist. Three days later, Whitney called Brian, sobbing and wailing.

Leukemia.

Brian sold his meticulously restored 1962 Chevy Impala, his coin collection, and finally, his house trailer. The girl hung on for almost a year.

Whitney had been of no help whatsoever. She had contributed nothing financially, emotionally, physically. Every time they took Honey to Women's and Children Hospital in Lafayette, Louisiana, Whitney acted as if she was the one suffering.

In the framed photograph, Honey looked gaunt, sick, even with the beautiful smile on her face. Heather also looked exhausted, but she too smiled.

Brian carefully put the photograph back in its place.

He'd seen Heather the other day. His supervisor and his supervisor's supervisor and he had gone to the Dead End Bar for Tuesday's smothered steak and rice and gravy plate lunch. It was a 'business lunch' as the three talked about the upcoming summer internship program at the Water and Sewer facility.

'Born to Be Wild' boomed out of the overhead speakers. But it was not the original; it was a cover version by the group Riot. Brian had pulled his head up from his plate of food; that had been one of his favorite version of that song. Honey and Heather had always squealed with delight whenever he played it and the three would dance as silly as they possibly could, playing air guitar, air drums.

Heather's long blonde hair hung down, nearly trailing the floor as she bounced. Then when the singer wailed the chorus, she whipped her long hair out, then let it wrap around herself.

"Damn, would love to just..." the supervisor's supervisor muttered, watching as Heather shrugged out of her leopard print top, revealing a faux leather bra holding her 34E breasts.

But in the photograph, Heather Ann Breaux wasn't a nineteen year old stripper. In the photograph, she was a sweet young lady, with her big sister, smiling for an unseen photographer.

Brian gave the photograph one more look and sad smile, then unplugged the vacuum cleaner. Putting the appliance away into the small closet, he checked his watch and determined that the heavy bedspread was probably just about finished with the rinse and spin cycle.

In the apartment's laundry room, Sandy lolled in one of the uncomfortable plastic chairs. Brian was convinced now that the woman was on drugs; a line of drool trickled out the corner of her mouth. In her position, her skirt had risen and Brian could see her bald mound. Her inner lips hung out of her mound, meat curtains, one of his crew members called it.

He took the heavy bedspread out of the washing machine. Sandy roused when the lid clanged back down.

"Huh? What?" she asked, looking around.

"Oh, hey, how's it going?" she smiled vacantly at Brian.

"All right; you?" Brian asked as he fed the dryer some quarters. "Think your clothes are just about done."

"Huh? Oh, oh yeah," Sandy agreed and staggered over to the noisily whirring washing machine.

"See you," Brian said and left the stuffy, dank smelling room.

"Yeah, see you," Sandy agreed.

While Brian was in his room, checking the water and feed for Bonnie and Clyde, Carmen was in her apartment, fixing their lunch.

"God, want an herb garden like that Brian's got, she said. "Some fresh basil?"

She studied the kitchen window frame. She then looked at their larger window. Because they lived in a corner unit, they had not one, but two windows.

"How much you think one would cost?" she asked her brother.

"Want go ask him?" Philippe asked.

"You just want to go over there and fuck him again," Carmen playfully accused.

"Fuck yeah! Like you don't?" Philippe admitted.

THE END

**Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure and post them here for your enjoyment. I thank you for reading my stories.

I especially thank those that take the time to rate my stories and those that take time to leave comments.

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Dark_StormDark_Stormalmost 6 years ago
One small suggestion

You talked about how the story jumps about in your intro. The easiest way to separate the flashbacks from the rest of the story would be to run a string of asterisks between the changes in timeline.

I liked the story well-enough, but the herb garden didn't seem to have any more significance or meaning to the rest of the story, than the grill on the patio did. There were a lot of other story elements--like his family backstory (divorced, reformed alcoholic, one daughter dead, the other a stripper)--that lost any significance when the story just ended.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStonealmost 7 years ago
A very sweet character study

It's like a piece of tapestry. But there are so many hanging threads. Will Brian and Phillipe reunite with Adam Hooper? Will they discover they've had the same lover? Will Brian reunite with his impossibly sexy older daughter? Phillipe and Brian will be working together in the Summer. What is the meaning of all these coincidences? Will Brian build Carmen her Herb Garden? Will Brian find out his lovers are not married, but are brother and sister? So many unanswered questions!

There is room for a chapter 2, if you have the will to write it. You say you don't, and I can accept that.

JMUDreamscapeJMUDreamscapealmost 7 years ago
Sad...

The story is great and exciting and while sometimes difficult to follow, each flashback builds the characters well. I label this comment sad because I definitely would like to see where this goes. But thank you for your submission regardless.

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