by m_storyman_x
Hot story but the "dad" character you presented in the earlier chapter does not fit his actions in this chapter, at all. 4*
Looking forward to the next episode, especially what happens when David tells Mandy about Katie, because if he doesn't then his character is ruined.
Not sure how you are going to work out the Mandy/Mom problem, but I'm looking forward to finding out! 5/5
Part of chapter 3 & all of chapter 4 are a teenagers mind running amuck with all his thoughts and dreams of sexual fantasy ! Should we be looking a "head" (pun intended) for chapter 5.
I loved Mom teaching David how to make a woman squirt like that!! It is quite the accomplishment to be able to show a woman what she is capable of...done it a couple of times.
This is quite the adventure...I am still enjoying following the adventures of all these folks...
Mandy's mom...NEXT in the conquests!!
Five**5**Stars!!
Stopped reading after about the first half page and won't finish the rest. May look at some of your other stories, since other posters previously said they were pretty good.