All Comments on 'High School Dates Ch. 10'

That was Super HOT!!!!

Excellent story sir.

How does one apply for editing assistant???

FDD

Betsy has a point about this being early still for him to decide to be in another long term relationship. However, at 18, how "forever love" could it be? Different time, I guess. Glad that he manage to get some closure w/ Mandy. That whole thing is frustrating.

Another chapter in this outstanding story is a five stars gift to the reader from an outstanding author. The interrelationships between the characters is fascinating as they develop, and the romantic atmosphere is top notch. The chapter concludes leaving the reading pining to find out what is going to happen next. This is Romance story telling at its best.

Sorry, but I cannot see it as a romantic story. The guy is a total pushover who can't say no. It seems no parent in this story is faithful in this universe and all are cheaters. I think that given all these examples and being the pushover he is, the MC won't be able to have a committed relationship with one only girl. It seems a story fitting more in loving wives than in romantic ones.

5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Amazing work… keep doing a great job

Very hot but he should not have fucked Mandy, she is unsalvageable.

Sorry but Incest is a total NO. Loved the character’s empathy with the various girls but left this story when it was an option that if he left his door open his mother could join him. You write well and i enjoyed other parts in this series but, unless you hold off on the incest i wont read any other of this, or future, stories

As usual, can't wait to see where you take this!

I liked the sex but the story seems off. This is a guy that is supposed to be thinking about a possible girlfriend and you throw in Mandy and Jessica and her mom.

I am not sure where you re going with this. It is a good story though.

Hot. 5stars

Damn sexy story!

He is still deeply in love with Mandy, and She with him. He should marry her because he will never be happy with another woman, adopt the kid, and live happily ever after.

Good story. I have a feeling that Jessica will want David and tell Mandi she was stupid to hurt him. Davideo should try and date Jessica or get with Patty. Mandy should find a way to ruin her baby daddy's famoly social standing and get out getting married or have her self get cheating and see if her baby daddy will call off the wedding can't wait to see what will in chapter 11

This story is hot, heartbreaking, and so fun to read, I'm hoping you write it off where Mandy goes runaway bride on her baby daddy and goes back to David. But he should not take her back immediately considering what she did in breaking up with him, I think in the end David should have both Mandy and Betsy because they both sound perfect with him. Or at least one of the few girls Mandy will allow David to have sex with when they're back together.

i Enjoy reading this series. I hope it continues,

This has been kinda fun, but the emotional component is getting less compelling the more bedmates the MC engages with. I get that it's just a silly romp, but I find the appeal lessening compared to the first few parts.

Well, well, well...Merry Christmas to David. And to all his girls, of course. I agree with Jessica, sex with a willing friend actually does help with a broken heart, speaking from experience!!

Mandy...I am of the same line of thinking as the other reader who suggests the "ruin" of sperm-donor's parents social standing...they are a couple of cunts, wanting Mandy to abort the baby to save face for them!! No love there...just a future full of pain, misery, and nothing good for Mandy.

As far as David 'punishing' Mandy for her 'indiscretion'...ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!! Love Forgives a wrong, and moves on to healing the rift, NOT widening the damage already ✅ done!! This is what I hope to see here, along with the widening of the "HAREM" that David is 💗 growing...ALL the women who love him (mom's included!)

Patty deserves to be in this group...her starting off the way she did was her protecting herself; the use of the sex angle was EXCELLENT THINKING on her part...it led to closure for her, vís-a-vís her ex and his bad behavior towards her. Davis is exactly what she needed, PLUS the rest of the MIT guys get it rubbed in their faces that she is not totally unattainable, but is discerning in her choice of who to be with!!

So much more I could say...and all of it nice/positive!!

FIVE**5**STARS...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡💯

I'm still wondering why Mandy can't marry David and let him adopt the child. She declared she felt wrong forcing that on him, but what if he loves her so much that he loves the child too?

But, there are 22 chapters of this already published, so it's been determined before I ever found the series. Guess we'll see.

Maybe the best series ever? Thank you so much.

I agree with an earlier comment, that the excess sex negates the emotional intensity in the story. It’s seems like you’re throwing a lot of extra sex in there because this is literotica. Just letting you know, it takes away from your story, rather than adding to it. I know he’s not in a committed relationship, but the guy needs to learn how to use the word “No.” The extra sex is disrespectful towards the women in his life that truly care for him. He’s acting like a worse slut than Mandy is made out to be. For someone who doesn’t chase pussy, he sure gets laid a lot. He’s pretty spoiled, and doesn’t appreciate the women in his life that love him. I hope he grows up at some point.